A Surprised Death

A happy go lucky guy was he,   
until the "thread" of bad health set in.      
As the many years passed by,                                                                                                                        there would be times our "silence" would abound.       
We would always say I Love You on the phone,     
we wanted our "fathomless" love to be heard.
The day the phone call came in was a surprise, 
the "breathless" words said your brother is not doing well.        
I can still remember the silver "hair" shaping his face,  
his deep "dark" "green" eyes looking out into space.                             
In life some thing’s cannot be fixed,                                                    
my "heart" has been broken into a million pieces over this.                 
He is in the "beautiful" place they call heaven,                                             singing with all the "birds" and angels together.

2/21/2020
(He passed away Nov 2019.)

1 Place    Writing Prompt - Ten Words Contest Judged:  3/10/2020 Sponsored by: Dear Heart
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Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 1:48 AM
A wonderful tribute.. You conveyed your emotions well.. Great win Paula..
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March 12, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day................
La France Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem and thanks for taking part _Constance
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March 12, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Things have been crazy here. I am reading your e-mail. This win made my day. I am honored to have won. Have a great day..........................
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February 23, 2020 at 8:58 PM
Very touching piece Paula. Sorry for your loss. Hugs, xomo
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February 24, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Thank You, for reading and writing. It is nice to hear from other writers. Enjoy your day. Hugs back.......
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