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A Sunset Serenade

Oblivious of the time and the few swimmers around me,
I lay sprawled on the soft sand underneath a colored umbrella,
Enjoying the gentle peace and calm of the evening dying sunset.

My friend brought me a large cocktail, much appreciated,
As the sweet salty breeze that wafted towards the lonely beach
Ruffling lightly the wavelets that quietly rolled onto the smooth sand.

Far away, the sparkling sea shimmered silently as a seagull screeched 
And broke momentarily the minute murmur of the departing swimmers.
A slow sibilant whisper echoed from afar, a mermaid’s delight?

It was not so much am alluring invitation but an earnest declaration
Of love that came from the dark deep below the dancing billows,
A sweet mysterious song of yearning and forgotten love.

Suddenly all was quiet again, except for the palpitations of my heart.
Incredibly my friend seemed oblivious of the mesmerizing song.
Must be the cocktail, he said as he watched the sun dying
Over the ocean and throwing long shadows behind us.
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George Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 9:47 PM
So beautiful and mesmerizing ! Enjoyed the beach scene so much ! The quiet seems to seep into my being and I wish to be in that sweet ambiance !
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 4:20 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Very imaginative I would say. I appreciate the humor in your visit to my page. It made my day brighter. Sara
Daniel Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 3:54 AM
This is absolutely stunning stuff, Victor:) a fave for me:)
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 11:46 PM
Great imagery, Victor, in this great setting. Eve
Ball Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 8:39 PM
This is beautiful Victor. Such vivid description I could see you lying in a lounge chair sipping your cocktail and watching the sun slip behind the horizon. The mermaid's song was an added bonus. Just don't try to follow her into the water. Great write my friend,. God Bless, JB
Horsman Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 10:17 PM
This poem is so inviting Victor, would love to share a Cocktail on those wonderful sands at sundown, with you.
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:24 PM
what an interesting one, hinting at the mermaids. Very cool, Victor.
Poet Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:43 PM
The breathtaking sunset landscape and the calm sea ideally set the stage for the longing and forgotten romance. Fantastic visuals! Take care, Dear Freind Victor
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:40 PM
- A sunset serenade must be the most beautiful you can experience, Victor ... even without a cocktail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 12:08 PM
such exquisite imagery thanks for sharing this with us today:-) hugs Jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 10:39 AM
The scene does look like an alluring invitation. Take care, my friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Buehler Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 8:51 AM
The beautiful sunset scenery and tranquil sea, set the scene perfectly for the yearning and forgotten romance. Wonderful imagery!
Y. Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 6:38 AM
WoW! Victor, Your poem is well written and has amazing imagery. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Superb images you painted to take us there at the scene, Victor. Each stanza an unfolding chapter of the story. And the turn your poem takes to mysterious song of forgotten love!
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:26 AM
You painted a lovely summer scene Victor, Tom
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