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A Sunset Serenade

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Oblivious of the time and the few swimmers around me, I lay sprawled on the soft sand underneath a colored umbrella, Enjoying the gentle peace and calm of the evening dying sunset. My friend brought me a large cocktail, much appreciated, As the sweet salty breeze that wafted towards the lonely beach Ruffling lightly the wavelets that quietly rolled onto the smooth sand. Far away, the sparkling sea shimmered silently as a seagull screeched And broke momentarily the minute murmur of the departing swimmers. A slow sibilant whisper echoed from afar, a mermaid’s delight? It was not so much am alluring invitation but an earnest declaration Of love that came from the dark deep below the dancing billows, A sweet mysterious song of yearning and forgotten love. Suddenly all was quiet again, except for the palpitations of my heart. Incredibly my friend seemed oblivious of the mesmerizing song. Must be the cocktail, he said as he watched the sun dying Over the ocean and throwing long shadows behind us.

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Date: 2/5/2023 9:47:00 PM
So beautiful and mesmerizing ! Enjoyed the beach scene so much ! The quiet seems to seep into my being and I wish to be in that sweet ambiance !
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Date: 4/12/2021 4:20:00 AM
Creative work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Very imaginative I would say. I appreciate the humor in your visit to my page. It made my day brighter. Sara
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Date: 4/9/2021 3:54:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning stuff, Victor:) a fave for me:)
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Date: 4/8/2021 11:46:00 PM
Great imagery, Victor, in this great setting. Eve
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Date: 4/8/2021 8:39:00 PM
This is beautiful Victor. Such vivid description I could see you lying in a lounge chair sipping your cocktail and watching the sun slip behind the horizon. The mermaid's song was an added bonus. Just don't try to follow her into the water. Great write my friend,. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/7/2021 10:17:00 PM
This poem is so inviting Victor, would love to share a Cocktail on those wonderful sands at sundown, with you.
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:24:00 PM
what an interesting one, hinting at the mermaids. Very cool, Victor.
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:43:00 PM
The breathtaking sunset landscape and the calm sea ideally set the stage for the longing and forgotten romance. Fantastic visuals! Take care, Dear Freind Victor
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:40:00 PM
- A sunset serenade must be the most beautiful you can experience, Victor ... even without a cocktail :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2021 12:08:00 PM
such exquisite imagery thanks for sharing this with us today:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/7/2021 10:39:00 AM
The scene does look like an alluring invitation. Take care, my friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 4/7/2021 8:51:00 AM
The beautiful sunset scenery and tranquil sea, set the scene perfectly for the yearning and forgotten romance. Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 4/7/2021 6:38:00 AM
WoW! Victor, Your poem is well written and has amazing imagery. Well done. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/7/2021 5:28:00 AM
Superb images you painted to take us there at the scene, Victor. Each stanza an unfolding chapter of the story. And the turn your poem takes to mysterious song of forgotten love!
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Date: 4/7/2021 3:26:00 AM
You painted a lovely summer scene Victor, Tom
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