A Sundial's Purpose

I only tell of Sunny hours...
I have a quiet routine on cloudy days,
I tighten up and bide with Time, inside,
Sip tea and wait until the clouds that hide
Are blown off into infinity; bright rays
Then show the shadow’s tell upon my dial.
I have, oft, bid Time stop, for Love’s sweet sake...
He says he cannot do it, but for a while
He slows it... thus Lovers their sweet while take
And, secret, bask beneath a welcome Sun...
And loll and take a nap upon the grass...
Meanwhile, I raise my mighty fist of brass
And shout the time (quietly) ‘til day is done.
O!  Once a month, I bless the faithful moon,
Who lights the time, while fairies play their tune.

Written On:  2/4/2019

Submitted For:  Sundial Wisdom Poetry Contest

Sponsored by:  Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 2/18/2019 3:37:00 PM
I love the idea of the sundial advocating for slowing time for we humans...and shaking the fist and shouting (quietly). Like dear Darlene below, I sense the fairies near at hand...
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/18/2019 7:44:00 PM
Thank you! I have always wanted time to slow for love, and perhaps, sometimes, it does!
Date: 2/5/2019 2:41:00 PM
Hello Andrew Fairchild, this poem is a Wow! For me,Iclose my eyes and i see the fairies playing their tune. A lovey poem. i like it. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/12/2019 2:48:00 PM
Your welcome.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/5/2019 5:26:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so very much for your good words!
Date: 2/4/2019 3:47:00 PM
Wonderful! Good luck in the contest :) xomo
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/4/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 2/4/2019 9:18:00 AM
I am right there sipping tea basking under the warmth of the quiet sun. Symbolism is great here. Well done, Andrew. <3
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 2/4/2019 12:27:00 PM
Thank You!
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