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A Sunday In Winter

It was a Sunday in winter Her health was at risk Discharged from the center, Wind blowing quite brisk She asked him to come Take her home right away But he was a bum He couldn’t be swayed It wasn’t convenient So he said with a smirk De-icing his car Would be too much work. She called Uber instead While he went back to bed And that’s when she knew She was dating a jerk.

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Date: 1/30/2023 11:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Deb. I appreciate the good words. I'm laying it all out there but I find it's good inexpensive therapy! Ellen
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Date: 1/30/2023 5:12:00 AM
Absolutely Ellen…love it! Debx
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