A Sun Hug

Driving in the car
The sun warmed my face
I felt so, so comfortable
I wanted to stay right in that place

But the traffic continued to move slowly
As the sun kept me company
It was as soothing as a warm bath
Like hot lemon tea with just a tad of honey

The sun left and I wanted it to stay
But it’s to be shared as long as there’s day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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J.T. Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Good job. I bet you'd be pretty good at rhyming
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