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Two shadowed lovers share a warm embrace, On the sandy shores of a romance new, Along love’s edges, soft fingertips trace, In the rhythm of love, their hearts beat true. Beneath golden skies an amber sea sways, Scintillating sensations on the skin, Love moves through her soul in passionate waves, He knocks at her door and she lets him in. In shadowed embrace, their love takes flight, Two hearts set sail upon the tranquil sea, One vessel dancing beneath the twilight. In the throes of passion, two souls set free. On the golden shores of a setting sun, A sultry summer romance, just begun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/11/2024 7:49:00 PM
' One vessel dancing beneath the twilight, their love takes flight. ' This is beautiful, romantic and passionate, all at the same time. Your thoughts are so dreamy. Love is a wonderful emotion and you've truly captured this moment within. Simply breathtaking, Edward. :) Brandy
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/11/2024 9:15:00 PM
Ah, Brandy, your words are a sweet serenade to my soul. Indeed love is a dance beneath the twilight, where hearts take flight and dreams find their wings. I am humbled that my words could capture such a moment of beauty and passion. Your appreciation warms my heart. Thank you for your kind and poetic response. May love continue to inspire us both.
Date: 7/10/2024 8:12:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Edward
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/10/2024 8:52:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I am pleased you found favor with this warm writing. I am grateful for your kind support.
Date: 7/10/2024 10:46:00 AM
Edward, a beautifully penned Sonnet, with many wonderful line, Constance
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/10/2024 8:51:00 PM
Thank you Constance!! I once had a very special Summer Romance that I reminisce on this time of year. Oh to be young again.
Date: 7/7/2024 8:39:00 AM
"On the golden shores of a setting sun, A sultry summer romance, just begun." I hope the romance lasts forever. Lovely write Edward. Love is a beautiful thing.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/7/2024 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Tonye for your heartfelt words. Love indeed has a timeless beauty, and I share your hope that this romance endures forever. Your appreciation adds a radiance to this piece. May your passionate embers always remain stoked and may love’s fire continue to burn brightly for you.
Date: 7/6/2024 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful and so well woven romantic poem! I love the rhymes and imagery youv painted here in such an eloquent manner! Brilliant alliterations too! And fitting picture to go with your sonnet. Well done
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/6/2024 2:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Empress. I am pleased you enjoyed the imagery and picture (I just figured out how to add pics, ha, ha.) Thank you for talking the time to leave an inspiring comment. Your support means more than you know.
Date: 7/5/2024 10:24:00 AM
A passionate poem, it has magnetising rhyme. May their future endure and include some stuff to talk about. This is heartwarming poem that pleases the ears and soul.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/6/2024 7:34:00 AM
I am so happy you enjoyed this poem Hilda. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us on this piece. I appreciate your kind words and support. I am so grateful
Date: 7/4/2024 1:07:00 PM
Beautiful. Brandy will love this gem. Have you ever tried writing in iambic pentameter? Tough nut to crack
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/11/2024 7:49:00 PM
:) You know I love romantic poetry.
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Edward Wraith
Date: 7/5/2024 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Tom. What is this iambic pentameter? Never heard of it….
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/4/2024 1:56:00 PM
Actually, lines 1, 10, 14 are perfect meter

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