A Summer Couplet

A Summer Couplet When an April shower becomes a summer breeze Giant sunflowers will kiss your knees Contest: LOVIN' SUMMER: A Summer Couplet Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
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Adams Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 9:05 PM
such a beautiful image...i love sunflowers, lovely couplet! :)
Duncan Avatar
October 1, 2013 at 12:38 AM
I love this, awesome words John ;}
Canama Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 10:10 PM
A great poem! Congrats!
A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 10:53 AM
loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda
Posey Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:02 AM
I love the kudos you bring, however just a visit would be as sweet... Hugs....Jake
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:30 PM
John I love this image. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Posey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Thanks Connie, Your comments are priceless and much appreciated....Jkke
Kendrick Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 3:33 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
Posey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Sara, your visits are always pleasing and your comments are encouraging.... Jake
Liwayway Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your win friend John....Cheers :)
Posey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Thank you Maria....Your comments are encouraging... Jake
Puddifoot Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:27 PM
very summery, bright and breezy, I can picture those sunflowers! congrats on your win in the contest :)
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:35 PM
Your visits and comments mean a lot... Thank you Charlotte...... Jake
Merryman Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:24 PM
I love how light hearted and whimsical this verse is! Congrats on your win, John! Love, Kim
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Kim, this one just popped out of my pen.... Thanks..... Jake
Merryman Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:23 PM
I love how light hearted and whimsical this verse is! Congrats on your win, John! Love, Kim
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:32 PM
Thank you, Kim, I really picked this one out of thin air... Jake
Anglesey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Hey Jake, saw this on the winners list, A Summer Couplet... very nice and summery ...love the image of sunflowers ..nice :)
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:31 PM
Karen, your visit and comments are treasured.... Jake
Guzzi Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Thank you, Debbie.... I appreciate your comments.... Jake
Haick Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 11:45 PM
I close my eyes and I am in this picture you've painted, Jake! Beautiful!! Congratulations on a very fine win! Always, Annalise
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Thank you, dear Annalise. I'm always happy when you visit. You always leave such kind remarks.... Love ya... Jake
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June 29, 2013 at 3:06 PM
John, love the sunflowers down here this time of year. he he he we couldn't seek for a better and brighter yellow view.... Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Thanks SKAY, I'm an old Texas boy who can appreciate what you are going through....Much love your way.... Jake
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Lovely couplet here John.Congrats on your win.
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 2:16 PM
Thank you Kash. I am honored by your comment....Jake
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 1:03 PM
My favorite thing to grow ......taller than me, they are !! :)
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 2:13 PM
As I explained to Seren, there is a species that, in the presence of beauty, will bow, in humility and kiss your knees.... Thanks for your sweet comment... I see pollen all over your knees....Love ya... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:40 AM
this one was so adorable. And I LOVE sunflowers. Did you know?? Congrats on third place.
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:37 AM
No, I didn't know but it is easy to always associate you with anything beautiful.... Thanks for your review and placement in your fun contest.... Hugs.... Jake
Johnson Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 8:28 AM
Great fun. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Thanks, dearest Joyce. You are special and your comments are coveted.... Jake
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Well done John, congratulations.
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:41 AM
Richard, I always look forward to any review from you. Your talent gives special meaning to your comments... Jake
May Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:47 AM
a beautiful couplet John....congrats on your win....
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 4:08 AM
Thanks, Joseph. I appreciate your comments.... Jake
Roberts Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:16 AM
The rain we have here they kiss the top of your head......congrats loved it ....Seren
Posey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:23 AM
Thanks, dear Seren. You are right, but in the presence of beauty they bow in humility and kiss your knees. Love ya.... Jake
Knapp Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Fun and full of life. Love it my friend.
Posey Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Thanks, Debbie. This just came out and stuck on the page.... So I left it alone... Jake
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed your creative and descriptive couplet..Those sunflowers are a beautiful sight when they first start to bloom....Haiku are not the easiest form of poetry to write but sometimes they just flow from the reservoir..Thanks for enjoying them..Sara
Posey Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 1:39 PM
Thank you Sara, I hope to do well.... Jake
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 3:40 PM
I love this one. The image is cheerful and full of summer's warmth. Warm Smiles, Connie
Posey Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Thanks for your visit... I appreciate your comments.... Jake
Candy Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 5:51 PM
Beautiful couplet, John. Winning wishes for you..! ^__^
Posey Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, my friend...... Jake
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