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A Summer Couplet

Children splashing in a plastic pool,
Eating popsicles and staying cool.


6/11/13
For Andrea Dietrich's "Lovin' Summer couplet contest"

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Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 10:57 AM

Kim,loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2013 at 10:51 PM

Kim, :-( thank you for everything, you're precious in every way, I am happy you are a part of the soup, . your words of comfort meant a lot. Love~ Linda

Ilene Bauer

July 1, 2013 at 4:57 PM

so simple, but so easy to envision! congrats on your win...

Olusegun Arowolo

June 30, 2013 at 3:57 PM

Splendid! Congrats on your well deserved win,Kim...

Audrey Haick

June 30, 2013 at 12:35 AM

: ) : ) : ) This brings out the warm smiles, Kim! Congratulayions on a fine win! Love, Annalise

Skat A

June 29, 2013 at 3:23 PM

Kim. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

June 29, 2013 at 1:32 PM

What a pleasant picture you have penned here Kim!Congrats on the win.

Carrie Richards

June 29, 2013 at 1:29 PM

My very own grandkids!! It all is so familiar!! This one makes me smile!

John Posey

June 29, 2013 at 10:32 AM

Beautifully done! I wish mine flowed as well... Congratulations.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

June 29, 2013 at 8:56 AM

this was the summer I loved as a child. Very nice, Kim, congrats in my contest. I appreciate your support.

Barbara Gorelick

June 29, 2013 at 8:23 AM

Every kids perfect day...congrats for capturing it! BG

Keith Bickerstaffe

June 16, 2013 at 9:08 AM

Two delightful 9-syllable lines with perfect flow and rhyming! Nifty 'p' alliteration too, and 'refreshing' imagery. Well done Kim!! Best wishes, Keith