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A Summer Couplet

Children splashing in a plastic pool, Eating popsicles and staying cool. 6/11/13 For Andrea Dietrich's "Lovin' Summer couplet contest"

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:57:00 AM

Kim,loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2013 10:51:00 PM

Kim, :-( thank you for everything, you're precious in every way, I am happy you are a part of the soup, . your words of comfort meant a lot. Love~ Linda

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/1/2013 4:57:00 PM

so simple, but so easy to envision! congrats on your win...

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 6/30/2013 3:57:00 PM

Splendid! Congrats on your well deserved win,Kim...

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/30/2013 12:35:00 AM

: ) : ) : ) This brings out the warm smiles, Kim! Congratulayions on a fine win! Love, Annalise

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:23:00 PM

Kim. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 1:32:00 PM

What a pleasant picture you have penned here Kim!Congrats on the win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:29:00 PM

My very own grandkids!! It all is so familiar!! This one makes me smile!

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 10:32:00 AM

Beautifully done! I wish mine flowed as well... Congratulations.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 8:56:00 AM

this was the summer I loved as a child. Very nice, Kim, congrats in my contest. I appreciate your support.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/29/2013 8:23:00 AM

Every kids perfect day...congrats for capturing it! BG

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/16/2013 9:08:00 AM

Two delightful 9-syllable lines with perfect flow and rhyming! Nifty 'p' alliteration too, and 'refreshing' imagery. Well done Kim!! Best wishes, Keith

John Posey

Date: 6/13/2013 7:28:00 PM

Well Done, Kim.... I believe you just moved my entry down another notch... I still love Ya..... Jake

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2013 10:38:00 AM

- Children's big summer enjoyment, Kim! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/11/2013 11:10:00 PM

That is definitely a summer scene ....Seren