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I see me in every little scared child Littler than even the smallest of her peers Voiceless outside, screaming inside Taking solace in a closed space with a dozen imagined friends I see me in every defiant teenager Beautiful, smart yet full of lies and seductive tricks She knows no better The awed uncles are just wolves waiting to tear her apart I see me in a distressed youth Unwanted baby in hand, no man to pat her back Now she knows better A smile too many leads down a dark path to disruption I see me now a woman with a vantage view Able to sift the shaft out and tell rubies from ruffles Through pain strength is born Robe cladding, teeth shining, accolades shimmering, claps roaring

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Date: 8/1/2019 6:03:00 AM
What a poignant poem! I like your understated title as well. You have a message of hope woven into this story of pain. A very well written poem.
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Olufunke Ayeni
Date: 8/9/2019 1:23:00 PM
thank you so much for the compliment
Date: 7/28/2019 8:04:00 PM
Well done :)
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Date: 7/28/2019 4:01:00 PM
Very good reading and realistic message!
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Olufunke Ayeni
Date: 7/28/2019 4:59:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 7/28/2019 10:31:00 AM
Hmm nice poem ....."through pain strength is born" I like the phrase.
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Olufunke Ayeni
Date: 7/28/2019 5:00:00 PM
Thank you

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