A Sum of Complex Life

A day goes smooth with wind
moves swiftly across sunrise
earth rotates quickly
dancing with sun gently

here i lie down and wake up
inside giant cupboard full of human
living in complexity 
the creation of technology amazes

we are just too surprised
as it serves to aid
we don't compromise in it instead
as we prolong diffculty
while backfiring the words of life is short
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 11, 2024 at 11:51 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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November 21, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Love that first stanza.. such is life, that is what they say.. Well written...
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