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A Suggested Suggestion-Or- C Section Suggestion

the snapping turtle's tongue hung dangling as a glow worm lit just enough for to see warm enough for to be a meal more than a little death

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Date: 2/28/2020 4:12:00 PM
Fast paced and fun to read Jeff.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 2/29/2020 11:58:00 PM
Thanks Caren. You can thank Richard Lamoureux. A c before a lit is most certainly dripping in delight... his comment not mine lol wink

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