A Sudden Reply To Love-Call and Response-Collab

A Sudden Reply to Love - Call and Response SUDDENLY... by: Germaine Pasley Just a kiss just a touch Just a little too much Keep my love keep my heart Keep my mind for a start Hold me close hold me tight Hold me through the night Love me now love me free Love me nice and see How my love can suddenly Take a chance and be There's a place there's a time There's a beauty in our rhyme When I'm low when I'm sad When I'm lost or feeling mad You give me hope give me bliss Give me one tender kiss And I'm lost and I'm found And I'm claimed all around Love me now love me free Love me nice and see How my love can suddenly Take a chance and be Take a chance and be Suddenly... REPLY TO LOVE... by: Dan Kearley I'll take your kiss With your sweet touch I could never get enough With all your love in your sweet heart Has filled my mind right from the start I'll hold you close, and tender tight With flaming passion all thru the night My love for you now will always be Believe in me, and you will see How our love will suddenly Take a chance and be... With me Any place or anytime Our rhymes beauty will intertwine When your sad or feeling low Or just lost with no where to go I'll give you hope with a tender kiss Filled with passion, and with bliss If your ever lost you will be found For my love for you knows no bounds My love for you now will always be Believe in me, and you will see How our love will suddenly Take a chance and be With me...
A call and response poem collaboration :))
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Cheesman Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 2:00 AM
Oh this is such a seamless, touching, romantic poem. Really love the collaboration. Shaz
Macfarlane Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Germaine & Dan.......this is so touching, tender and sweet! Well done you two!
Wesley Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 9:18 AM
Ingredients like these make for a tasty dish Dan. Makes me want to jump in and partake of all the goodies! So glad you have a great pardner for these collab's; the two of you are the purrrfect duo for these romantic gems! Love, Lizzie
Elliott Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM
:) thank you! i do love the work we do together...all of our collabs have such heat and love within them!!!
Merryman Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 7:41 AM
All I can say is, WOW! A wonderfully romantic collaboration! Excellent! Love, Kim
Elliott Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM
thanks :))
Kearley Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 11:26 AM
Ha,ha...Thanks Kim. :o)
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 3:59 AM
Big LOVE ..... sooo sweeeet and lovely. - f.e.f. oxox Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:58 AM
me like......lol....
Kearley Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 11:24 AM
It's a love song...You like? :o)
Hu Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
beautiful write:)
Kearley Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 12:02 AM
Thank You,I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)
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