A Sudden Reply To Love - Call and Response

SUDDENLY...
by: Germaine Pasley

Just a kiss just a touch
Just a little too much
Keep my love keep my heart
Keep my mind for a start
Hold me close hold me tight
Hold me through the night

Love me now love me free
Love me nice and see
How my love can suddenly
Take a chance and be

There's a place there's a time
There's a beauty in our rhyme
When I'm low when I'm sad
When I'm lost or feeling mad
You give me hope give me bliss
Give me one tender kiss
And I'm lost and I'm found
And I'm claimed all around 

Love me now love me free
Love me nice and see
How my love can suddenly
Take a chance and be

Take a chance and be
Suddenly...

REPLY TO LOVE...
by: Dan Kearley

I'll take your kiss 
With your sweet touch 
I could never get enough 
With all your love in your sweet heart 
Has filled my mind right from the start 

I'll hold you close, and tender tight 
With flaming passion all thru the night 
My love for you now will always be 
Believe in me, and you will see 
How our love will suddenly 
Take a chance and be... 
With me 

Any place or anytime 
Our rhymes beauty will intertwine 
When your sad or feeling low 
Or just lost with no where to go 
I give you hope with a tender kiss 
Filled with passion, and with bliss 
If your ever lost you will be found 
For my love for you it knows no bounds 
My love for you now will always be 
Believe in me, and you will see 
How our love will suddenly 
Take a chance and be 
With me...


A call and response poem collaboration :))

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/27/2012 11:37:00 PM
I smile everytime I read it :o) And of course (blush)....That is really an amazing write! I really enjoyed collabing with you Germaine.. ;o)~ Until the next one...Keep smiling :o)
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:34:00 PM
Just simply amazing:)
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/27/2012 1:47:00 PM
thank you! i'm so glad you enjoyed it !!
Date: 6/25/2012 6:15:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration. Two great poems for one low price. Yay!
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/25/2012 6:17:00 PM
lol thank you! tell you a secret...i forced him into it HAHA he had left a short response to the original poem and i made him continue it LOL ... it came out gorgeous didnt it? in truly love this, makes me smile everytime i read it or say it in my mind...i'll not admit i have it memorized ... maybe... lol ok i do :)
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