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A Sudden Reply To Love - Call and Response

SUDDENLY... by: Germaine Pasley Just a kiss just a touch Just a little too much Keep my love keep my heart Keep my mind for a start Hold me close hold me tight Hold me through the night Love me now love me free Love me nice and see How my love can suddenly Take a chance and be There's a place there's a time There's a beauty in our rhyme When I'm low when I'm sad When I'm lost or feeling mad You give me hope give me bliss Give me one tender kiss And I'm lost and I'm found And I'm claimed all around Love me now love me free Love me nice and see How my love can suddenly Take a chance and be Take a chance and be Suddenly... REPLY TO LOVE... by: Dan Kearley I'll take your kiss With your sweet touch I could never get enough With all your love in your sweet heart Has filled my mind right from the start I'll hold you close, and tender tight With flaming passion all thru the night My love for you now will always be Believe in me, and you will see How our love will suddenly Take a chance and be... With me Any place or anytime Our rhymes beauty will intertwine When your sad or feeling low Or just lost with no where to go I give you hope with a tender kiss Filled with passion, and with bliss If your ever lost you will be found For my love for you it knows no bounds My love for you now will always be Believe in me, and you will see How our love will suddenly Take a chance and be With me... A call and response poem collaboration :))

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Date: 6/27/2012 11:37:00 PM
I smile everytime I read it :o) And of course (blush)....That is really an amazing write! I really enjoyed collabing with you Germaine.. ;o)~ Until the next one...Keep smiling :o)
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:34:00 PM
Just simply amazing:)
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/27/2012 1:47:00 PM
thank you! i'm so glad you enjoyed it !!
Date: 6/25/2012 6:15:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration. Two great poems for one low price. Yay!
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/25/2012 6:17:00 PM
lol thank you! tell you a secret...i forced him into it HAHA he had left a short response to the original poem and i made him continue it LOL ... it came out gorgeous didnt it? in truly love this, makes me smile everytime i read it or say it in my mind...i'll not admit i have it memorized ... maybe... lol ok i do :)

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