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A Sudden Downpour

Rain beats down on the window pane As the flood gates of Heaven suddenly open It is pouring out in torrential flow Like a Reservoir, all at once broken It has come down as a welcome respite To fan away the humid sweltering heat It falls in drops and flows in rivulets Washing the dust of summer drought With a sudden burst from the weight laden clouds It lashes down in steam and fury Plummeting to form ripples in puddles And filling pools and ponds in hurry In slanting sheets, it almost pounds Flooding roads and making puddle Gushing through pipes and rushing down drains Water floods, causing men to waddle Rain has its abode in heavens so high And hides behind clouds of mournful gloom In silver strings, it spans the Earth And cleanses the plants in resplendent gleam Sudden is the wind, coming to shoo away the clouds And the sky is once more cerulean blue As the music stops and the humdrum stills The water seeps, giving no evident clue. After an angry couple’s furious fight, As the house goes back to an uncanny calm, The rain has vanished, leaving little trace Cooling the Earth and causing no harm A Brian Strand Rime Poetry Contest Sponsor - Brian Strand

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Date: 12/31/2021 12:31:00 PM
Whoa! that was a storm! Well done! Best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 12/31/2021 11:27:00 AM
Valsa, This was an outstanding write. You painted a picture with movement. Blessings, Good luck in the contest ~ Debra
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Date: 12/31/2021 10:23:00 AM
"fury" and "hurry" well done! Enjoyed. As a child, I was told someone made God angry and He kicked the bucket causing the downpour. Now we see that almost everyday on the news, but many assure us the climate has not changed . . . . .Aloha!
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Date: 12/31/2021 8:32:00 AM
I agree the imagery is great, the emotion strong. I like the surprise ending. The storm is a great metaphor.
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Date: 12/31/2021 5:33:00 AM
Terrific imagery here "Sudden is the wind, coming to shoo away the clouds And the sky is once more cerulean blue As the music stops and the humdrum stills The water seeps, giving no evident clue."
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Date: 12/31/2021 4:42:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive poem, Valsa. Enjoyed the flow of your write from start to finish-- as I could hear and see the fleeting rain that floods the streets amid gusty winds.
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Date: 12/31/2021 2:47:00 AM
Really well described, Valsa, it rained like this here yesterday, in fact, it is raining again as I write this:) happy New Year:)
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Date: 12/31/2021 1:33:00 AM
Great descriptive poem. Last time it rained here like this my wall became wet. It's going to cost me to redo it. I'm too old to do it myself. Happy New Year.
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