A Successful Plight - Metamorph

Original - monorhyme Inside, he felt the time was right. He told himself, tonight's the night! The ring was in a box of white. Despite feeling anxious, and a little tight, he proposed to her, in the candlelight. She answered - yes, to his delight, which ended his successful plight! Rewrite - Rhyme This is it, he told himself! The time to propose is now! He wanted to ask her "the question," but wasn't, really sure, how! He bought a ring, in a little white box! His nerves were a literal mess! But everything turned out, delightful, because, the answer he got was a "yes!"