A Subjective Thing

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Seven-Ten
Created by Emile J. Pinet in 2018, (Seven-Ten), (must be centered). There should be a distinctive pattern. Do not use blank spaces to create shapes; use words. A non rhyme, twenty two-line verse poem with (190 Syllables)- 7 7 10 10 10, 7 7 10 10 10, 7 7 10 10 10, 7 7 10 10 10, 7 7

Time is a subjective thing, alining with your viewpoint. Whenever you're in a rush or anxious, it feels like time is perceptively slow, but if you're having fun, it runs faster. When young, days feel forever; there's always something to do. All the universe was yours to explore; and oblivious to watches and clocks, your perspective was effectively new. But those years flew by too fast; now, there's never enough time. And seemingly speeding up as we age; overnight, years morph into memories, and yesterdays outnumber tomorrows. Our perceptions of time change snagged in boredom's doldrums. And we tend to waste the little we have; but the sands of time never stop flowing; the past, present, and future are all one. We squander what we treasure; till we learn, we've no time left.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2023 5:39:00 AM

Good one. We do squander time for sure. We have to have some time to ourselves, we have to have a relaxation period at times, etc. which seem to be a waste for some people, but we need those times to survive with vitality. Thanks for sharing these ideas about time with us. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/22/2023 7:52:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, as always, my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Terry Miller

Date: 8/6/2022 1:13:00 AM

So true, Emile, so true. A fine poem; thank you for sharing

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/6/2022 7:56:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, as always my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/5/2022 1:34:00 PM

You speak the truth, my friend. The older we get the faster time seems to fly by. So true. I loved your last two lines especially, because, I think, we are all guilty of doing this without really thinking about it until it is too late. Good writing, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2022 3:38:00 PM

Thanks, Milt, time is a tricky thing indeed, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Steven Young

Date: 8/5/2022 12:54:00 PM

Interesting, the abrupt ending. Like the Sopranos final episode--cut to black. Disturbing, I like it.

Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2022 3:40:00 PM

Thanks, Steven, I appreciate your comments, time is often cut off abruptly my friend, Emile.