A Subconscious Prayer

Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home I tire of the Sorrows in LIFE Joy eludes me ; except in POEM I Truly miss my Beloved : WIFE But I am here, and SHE is There Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home In Heaven I’ll Live anywhere Golden Castle ; or Oceans foam I walk along my catacomb Fearful of Evil, silhouette Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home As Written in “Heaven’s Gazette” Just once more, I see my “ LENORE “ Be Queen of Heaven’s Honeycomb Ready to Live FOREVER More Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home

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David Smalling

Date: 9/29/2010 10:09:00 AM

One must have divine faith to pray like this, please tarry him, Lord, a little longer, and let us learn from his realtionship with you, how to long for your presence and believe our love ones are with you. Bravo, HG

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/16/2010 6:52:00 PM

so much of a divine prayer. it seems as if you're nearly there in your deep desire. the emotions & subconscious will always show signs. beautiful. i hope you're well, Harry.i love you always. ~Always&Forever your sister spirit, Lynn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/2/2010 5:57:00 PM

He will HG...but not just yet..I dont want you to go...BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2010 6:24:00 AM

Enjoyed your outpouring of love for your wife..Great love you two must have shared..Yes, I did enjoy reading Edna and I do fashion some of my writings from her ideas and style..Our son is in PT and rehab...He called yesterday and said that his pain level is better that he is walking a long distance using a walker..He has made friends with the others that are in the same area as him...He will have to learn to do everything differently because of the artificial joint..Thanks again for prayers..SK

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2010 9:55:00 AM

VERY MOVING WITH TRUTH*luv~SKAT

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/26/2010 9:24:00 PM

The heart is sad when a love is gone. The thoughts are always in the back of the mind. A sad poem wishing to reunite. God Bless Phyl

Nate D.

Date: 8/26/2010 9:20:00 PM

guilt is weak and brings most to their knees. excellent write"