A Subconscious Prayer

Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home
I tire of the Sorrows in LIFE
Joy eludes me ; except in POEM
I Truly miss my Beloved  : WIFE

But I am here, and SHE is There
Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home
In Heaven I’ll Live anywhere
Golden Castle ; or Oceans foam

I walk along my catacomb
Fearful of Evil, silhouette
Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home
As Written in “Heaven’s Gazette”

Just once more, I see my “ LENORE “
Be Queen of Heaven’s Honeycomb
Ready to Live FOREVER More
Lord I beseech Thee : Take me Home

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David Smalling

Date: 9/29/2010 10:09:00 AM

One must have divine faith to pray like this, please tarry him, Lord, a little longer, and let us learn from his realtionship with you, how to long for your presence and believe our love ones are with you. Bravo, HG

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/16/2010 6:52:00 PM

so much of a divine prayer. it seems as if you're nearly there in your deep desire. the emotions & subconscious will always show signs. beautiful. i hope you're well, Harry.i love you always. ~Always&Forever your sister spirit, Lynn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/2/2010 5:57:00 PM

He will HG...but not just yet..I dont want you to go...BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2010 6:24:00 AM

Enjoyed your outpouring of love for your wife..Great love you two must have shared..Yes, I did enjoy reading Edna and I do fashion some of my writings from her ideas and style..Our son is in PT and rehab...He called yesterday and said that his pain level is better that he is walking a long distance using a walker..He has made friends with the others that are in the same area as him...He will have to learn to do everything differently because of the artificial joint..Thanks again for prayers..SK