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A Strong Wind Blows

A strong wind blew
On the water blue
The storm had brewed
They weren't buckaroos
The sail broke in half
It was tied with a scarf
Hoping it would hold
All were feeling cold
Praying to get ashore
It seemed such a chore
This was never done
Their bodies were sore
With big boo-boos
They wanted to reach
           the beach
That was outreached

Copyright © Darlene De Beaulieu | Year Posted 2018

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Maria Williams Date: 3/13/2018 12:11:00 AM Certainly a blistery squall Darlene. Loved your monorhyme...Maria xx Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/13/2018 12:27:00 PM Hello Maria, yes those blistery squalls are really something. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 3/2/2018 7:52:00 PM Like your poem especially tonight as a strong wind blows outside. Darlene, this is Janis Thompson. I have changed to a pen name, Sian. Same person. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/3/2018 4:02:00 PM Hello Sian St. John,thank you for your lovely comment.I like the sound of the wind blowing.Thank you for telling me.Have a nice day my friend.

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 2/28/2018 7:18:00 PM Great imagery in your windy sea nature poem Darlene; the sea and wind are definitely unpredictable; glad I'm on dry land 99% of the time lol!~Che :) Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/1/2018 9:10:00 AM Hello Cheryl,thank you for your lovely comment.It is rough to be on the water when there is a storm.I have seen some ships bent at an angle,coming into shore. It is scary. have a nice day my friend.

Harry Horsman Date: 2/26/2018 3:54:00 PM Oh i like this mono rhyme, not easy to do, yet this is wonderful poetry, love it. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/26/2018 4:54:00 PM Hello Harry,No a mono rhyme is not easy to do. Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 2/25/2018 10:29:00 PM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/26/2018 8:43:00 AM Hello Ravi, thank you for the lovely comment. Hope all is well with you. Have a nice day my friend.

Silent One Date: 2/25/2018 4:25:00 PM Great imagery Darlene... Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/25/2018 5:15:00 PM Hello Silent One,thank you for the lovely comment my friend.

Alfred Berggren Date: 2/25/2018 4:18:00 PM A good sea poem with a good ending. Dar, you ought to write more of these. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/25/2018 5:19:00 PM Hello Alfred, yes I think I will write more of this type of poem.As of yet, no idea comes to mind. have a nice day my friend.

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/25/2018 12:10:00 PM Interesting man-versus-nature poem, Darlene! Janice Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/25/2018 2:42:00 PM Hello Janice,thank you for your nice comment, my friend.Have a nice day my froiend.

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/24/2018 9:29:00 PM Oh the power of nature, it wins every time. Tom Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/25/2018 8:50:00 AM Hello Tom, yes the power of nature wins every time. Have a nice day my friend.