Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Rhyme

A Strong Wind Blows

A strong wind blew
On the water blue
The storm had brewed
They weren't buckaroos
The sail broke in half
It was tied with a scarf
Hoping it would hold
All were feeling cold
Praying to get ashore
It seemed such a chore
This was never done
Their bodies were sore
With big boo-boos
They wanted to reach
           the beach
That was outreached

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Maria Williams March 13, 2018 at 12:11 AM Certainly a blistery squall Darlene. Loved your monorhyme...Maria xx Darlene De Beaulieu March 13, 2018 at 12:27 PM Hello Maria, yes those blistery squalls are really something. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Janis Medders Tobechi March 2, 2018 at 7:52 PM Like your poem especially tonight as a strong wind blows outside. Darlene, this is Janis Thompson. I have changed to a pen name, Sian. Same person. Darlene De Beaulieu March 3, 2018 at 4:02 PM Hello Sian St. John,thank you for your lovely comment.I like the sound of the wind blowing.Thank you for telling me.Have a nice day my friend.

Cheryl Hoffman February 28, 2018 at 7:18 PM Great imagery in your windy sea nature poem Darlene; the sea and wind are definitely unpredictable; glad I'm on dry land 99% of the time lol!~Che :) Darlene De Beaulieu March 1, 2018 at 9:10 AM Hello Cheryl,thank you for your lovely comment.It is rough to be on the water when there is a storm.I have seen some ships bent at an angle,coming into shore. It is scary. have a nice day my friend.

Harry Horsman February 26, 2018 at 3:54 PM Oh i like this mono rhyme, not easy to do, yet this is wonderful poetry, love it. Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2018 at 4:54 PM Hello Harry,No a mono rhyme is not easy to do. Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Ravi Sathasivam February 25, 2018 at 10:29 PM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Darlene De Beaulieu February 26, 2018 at 8:43 AM Hello Ravi, thank you for the lovely comment. Hope all is well with you. Have a nice day my friend.

Silent One February 25, 2018 at 4:25 PM Great imagery Darlene... Darlene De Beaulieu February 25, 2018 at 5:15 PM Hello Silent One,thank you for the lovely comment my friend.

Alfred Berggren February 25, 2018 at 4:18 PM A good sea poem with a good ending. Dar, you ought to write more of these. Darlene De Beaulieu February 25, 2018 at 5:19 PM Hello Alfred, yes I think I will write more of this type of poem.As of yet, no idea comes to mind. have a nice day my friend.

Janice Canerdy February 25, 2018 at 12:10 PM Interesting man-versus-nature poem, Darlene! Janice Darlene De Beaulieu February 25, 2018 at 2:42 PM Hello Janice,thank you for your nice comment, my friend.Have a nice day my froiend.

Tom Cunningham February 24, 2018 at 9:29 PM Oh the power of nature, it wins every time. Tom Darlene De Beaulieu February 25, 2018 at 8:50 AM Hello Tom, yes the power of nature wins every time. Have a nice day my friend.