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pleasantly chilly morning - patio is inviting! walking through the narrow path close to my house, soaking sunlight...feels heart-warming after a snowy harsh winter. browned Leaves sprawling on both sides of the pathway, waiting to return to the earth...as we do...soil wet and muddy. a yellow breast Warbler bravely approaches me - as if inviting to have a polite engaging  conversation. I enjoy mornings with birds, bees and butterflies. Never before noticed each and every bird has charming patterns on their wings - as if they want to showcase their beauty in a pageant. stroll peaceful in sun tranquil path strewed with brown leaves friendly warbler meets slowly my path was leading me to the direction of a river bank...find more spring-birds on my way. robin and oriole are busy building their intricate nests...looked at the chartreuse sky and spotted a returning flock of geese. it's almost Spring - the season we are anxiously looking forward to...nature awakens the poet in us. rebirth of beauty nature reawakening rejuvenation March 19, 2021 Springtime Haibun Poetry Contest Sponsor: M.L. Kaiser FIRST PLACE A Brian Strand "Your Pick" Poetry Contest (July 9,2021)

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Date: 8/9/2021 12:16:00 PM
You had me at the first line! I loved taking this morning walk with you and experiencing "rebirth of beauty," "rejuvenation" in your spirit! So nicely done. Congratulations on your win my friend.
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Date: 4/19/2021 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. I enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2021 6:36:00 PM
Back with congratulations dear Mala with this lovely set of Haibuns..Keep inspiring!
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Date: 3/30/2021 2:36:00 PM
Such a peaceful poem. I could hear the birds singing. It's beautiful, Mala.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/30/2021 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Ann. I find Haibun, a combination of prose and poetry- a very serene form. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/26/2021 6:22:00 PM
A beautiful poem filled with music, nature and colors. Poet does Justice to her metaphor which is a curved road. Poet never loses focus of her story and never disappoints the reader. As beautiful as a prizm or rainbow. Her words are her colors
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/26/2021 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Your inspiring comments are like music to me. BW ~ Mala
Date: 3/24/2021 9:14:00 PM
I very much enjoyed the stroll on this path of peaceful, silent natural beauty, Mala. The picture is also quite lovely. This is such an impressive entry. Good luck! :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/26/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn. Really appreciate your inspiring words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/23/2021 11:51:00 PM
What a serene atmosphere encapsulated in a lovely Haibun! I imagine myself strolling in that path, too. Best wishes in the contest..A winner for me.
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Date: 3/24/2021 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, JCB. Haibun is an interesting form - excellent for capturing meaningful moments.

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