Eve Roper Poet Verse

A Stroll On a Wintry Day

brilliant
  sunlight rays 
    nudge 
     and pirouette 
 through
  sailing clouds

 amid 
  wintry wind
   hair blows 
    artistic swirls

tickling
sudden sneeze

2/7/2022

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Sponsor	Brian Strand

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Gershon Wolf February 8, 2022 at 8:28 PM If anything could ever brighten the winter days (that I dread), this poem is it! Marvelous penning, Eve! ~ Here's to sunny wintry stroll. (Ha, ha. Just one to a customer. Bring on Spring!) Smiles, Gershon

Christuraj Alex February 8, 2022 at 7:39 PM Great description in short and simple words. Congratulations!

JC Brul February 8, 2022 at 3:09 PM Oh, so crisp and vivid! Brrrr, I could feel the winter chill! Your last 2 lines are astounding. Congratulations dear Eve.

Victor Buhagiar February 8, 2022 at 1:07 AM Give him a hankie. :)