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Willem Haenraets Dutch Painter - Paris

Premiere Contest WinnerA Stroll Down Paris City's Wet Streets

A stroll down Paris city's wet streets.
So, romantic as the Eiffel Tower comes to view.

Vendors line up selling their wares out of carts.
Some shouting, "one euro, one euro only.
The aroma and vibrant colors of seasonal flowers
In buckets, reds, blues, pinks and orange sherbet.

Colorful umbrellas tower
For shade of passer-buyers
In the youthful sunny hours
And the cool refreshing showers.

Evergreen trees so green and proud.
Other trees, bare limbs, leaves dangle tight,
While others drift from the wind thief,
And crunched beneath passerby feet.

Streetlamps a lite as the moon starts to rise,
Still the city streets are full of busy activity.
The sound of the trotting horses
Pulling carriages up and down the main road.

Dizzying lacework of simplicity of life.

10/11/2022

PS, never have been out of the United States.
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Baker Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 3:58 PM
The hustle and bustle of life in Paris. I enjoy the imagery of your observations, Eve. Congratulations on your trophy win! Well deserved, my friend. Have a great week! Bill
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:00 PM
This is such a great Ekphrasis, Dear Eve. Congratulations on your trophy win. Every word portray the bustling city of Paris. I had been there twice, but now after reading your poem, I see the city in a different light. Love ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Eve, this is so picturesque - "a dizzying lacework of the simplicity of life." Every element is "a lite" with clear, inviting images of the bustling city dear friend! Congratulations to you for your win!
Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2022 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your winning free verse work about the painting or your ekphrasis. I have seen a similar scene in a painting online. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Buehler Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:20 PM
Bustling scenes and sounds of beautiful Paris, came alive for me as I read this wonderful poem. C'est merveilleux! :)
Tor Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 6:28 PM
Your imagination reflects Paris Eve. Love your Poetry Tres Bien Madame...
Edmonds  Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 3:48 PM
A wonderful painting and accompanied write about wet streets of Paris. I’ve been there once on a long weekend trip and enjoyed it immensely… Belle
Leffanta Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 11:35 AM
I always admired the naturally beautiful women on the street, and the fragrance on the air! Very uplifting indeed! Aloha!
Cunningham Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Went there a few years ago and managed to get right to the top of the Eiffel tower. A beautiful city. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 1:51 AM
Have you ever been to Paris. I visited twice. Always expensive and one must be careful not to choose the cheap food. It can make you sick. Hugs.
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