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A Striptease of Words

Great poetry- How do I define your sheer delight?- See-through but not entirely uncovered- suggestive but not barely defined- I wait at the edge of clouds, enchanted by radiance; recall the brightest Sun I have ever known and the dearest burn so sweetly salved….

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Memory Melania Mutanuka

Date: 9/15/2016 5:56:00 PM

This is a Wow, such creative writing. :) Regards Memory Melania

Just James

Date: 8/20/2016 5:21:00 AM

I loved this one too

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/20/2016 1:57:00 PM

You made my day! Thank you.

Holly Bohto

Date: 8/6/2016 10:17:00 PM

Metophorically beautiful. Physics meets poetry meets dirty dancing. Patterns in thought connecting the dots. Time well spent. Thanks for the window into your soul. I think I'm barely peeking in. You have more beauty yet to be seen through the panes of glass in your minds eye with the light on at night and no curtains to block the view through your windows and audiences peering in at you.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/7/2016 10:07:00 AM

I can't begin to say how overjoyed I am to think you would take so much time with my work, explore and see the soul of me that I has into its creation. I am honored. I will frame your comments in my heart. Blessings, Holly! And have a perfectly beautiful day!!

Funom Makama

Date: 8/6/2016 12:07:00 PM

lovely and sweet.

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/7/2016 10:07:00 AM

Thank you, Funom. Have a great weekend my friend!!

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/7/2016 10:00:00 AM

Thank you, Funom. Have a great weekend my friend!!

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/3/2016 4:04:00 AM

Great words good poem xxxx

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/3/2016 8:03:00 AM

Hi Wendy; thank you. Have a beautiful day!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/1/2016 10:02:00 PM

This is wonderful Joe! Letting the reader come to their own conclusion about a poem leaves a bit of fascinating mystery to ponder. I love this! 7 ; )

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/2/2016 4:50:00 AM

It makes for enjoyment on multiple levels I think. Thank you so much for seeing that. You have made my day! Year! Blessings my friend!!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/1/2016 3:14:00 PM

Well weaved

Joe Dimino
Date: 8/1/2016 9:50:00 PM

Thank you, Tim; have a great day!!