A Stretch of the Imagination

diminished hexaverse using words rather than syllables

Moon dust is said to cause
woe for earthling’s noses and lungs.
Powdery particles eat through stainless steel,
stick like glue and congest breathing.
I mention in passing another threat -
moon dust jams expensive electronic equipment.

Moon dust floats down unknowingly
to earth carrying deep secrets
from the lunar atmosphere like
invisible snow - pixie dust which
beguiles enchanted earthlings with ecstasy.

Some dreamers have insisted
that these invasive particles
when dispersed upon them,
totally transfixes two teenagers:

increasing their chances
for physical attraction -
magical, mesmeric magnetism,

doubling parents'
apprehension and

angst.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Trichet Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Awesome free write RAP. Love your style, congrats
Poteet Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 8:24 AM
thank you, Mark, good to hear from a newcomer (to me, anyway). appreciate the comment.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Very creative with lots of imagination Reason. Congratulations on your win.
Smith Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 1:45 PM
I like it...creative...congrats Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 7:53 AM
Wow wonderful write Reason! Congrats on huge win!
Yvonne Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 6:37 AM
A very creative write. Congratulations on your fine win.
Poteet Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 10:08 AM
thanks, Maurice.
Mehta Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Wonderfully done poem, congrats on the win, Reason
Allison Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 4:25 AM
very imaginative write and I love the alliteration- many congrats on your win:-0 Hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 12:52 PM
I do like to read and enjoy the poems on the winners lists - that is the way I am learning so much:-) Hugs jan xx
Poteet Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 12:48 PM
thanks, Jan, I think the alliteration gives it color in the absence of rhyme . Glad for the comment and it is nice that you noticed it.
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 12:59 AM
This had to be the most imaginative poem of the bunch, and the title was quite fitting!! Is all that beginning stuff really true about moon dust?? The last part was so cute!! Congrats in my contest
Poteet Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Thanks, Andrea, first part - true, not based on my experience but from research. The last part is true also from experience. Appreciate the placement.
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