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Like a toddler taking maiden steps The narrow stream moves through the woods Tripping and falling over pebbles and boulders Chiming its silver anklets Drowning the whisper of bamboo leaves Its sweet murmur falls in my ears As an eternal living melody The cosmic song heard over aeons Forcing itself in irrepressible flow It thrusts and shoves its way down Through thickets and a line of ferns And the tangle of creepers and brambles As the water sluices down the rocks It is a frothing braided torrent Producing a harsh grating roar Like the crescendo of a tribal symphony There it forms into a small pool With its waves gently rippling Where birds merrily come to take a dip Refreshed they fly back sunning their wet feathers Sometimes travelling unseen It suddenly emerges into the open Cutting its way through cracks and fissures Never willing to surrender before hurdles With a bearing immaculate in grace It sends out waves of pure delight What joy it is to watch the dilly dally Of this sedate pilgrim moving to its destination July.31.2022 Anything Goes Poetry Contest Sponsor. Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 8/3/2022 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful steam, great imagery
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Valsa George
Date: 8/6/2022 4:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot Paghunda..... Have a great weekend !
Date: 8/1/2022 8:56:00 AM
I love your tale of the stream Valsa. We become the stream when we read. Marvelous imagery and theme. This one is a favorite for me. Thank you for your effort in writing and sharing. Exceptional and beautiful. Blessings your way...
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Date: 8/6/2022 4:08:00 AM
Thank ou so much Michael ! Glad you could enjoy this ! I feel honored that you see this as one of your Faves.
Date: 8/1/2022 1:34:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful scenes, great imagery. I love nature and such poems bring me joy.
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Date: 8/1/2022 3:04:00 AM
I know you are very close to Nature. Glad you liked my poem ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 7/31/2022 7:39:00 PM
Such a graceful, delicate extended metaphor, Valse. A truly moving poem. Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:36:00 PM
Much delighted by your words of deep appreciation ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 7/31/2022 6:50:00 PM
Keep moving your feet and your heart dear pilgrim and the wonders will never cease, nor the poetry, nicely penned dear friend, it was a pleasure to read you this evening, blessings
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for your insightful comment dear Rose . Glad ou enjoyed this poem.
Date: 7/31/2022 6:36:00 PM
Reminds me of the French adage, "Two tears were flowing down a river; cried one: "I am the tear of a girl who lost her lover!" Sobbed the other: "I am the tear of the girl who found him!" To the sea! To the sea! Aloha!
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:34:00 PM
You are so entertaining Rico. I enjoy your comments as well as your limericks . Thanks a lot !
Date: 7/31/2022 9:33:00 AM
Exquisite imagery crafted by your gifted pen, Valsa. You bring forth the sights and sounds eloquently, as always.
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:32:00 PM
I feel extremely delighted to find that that you liked it ! Thank you so much Vijay !
Date: 7/31/2022 8:55:00 AM
It purpose is to make that pilgrimage to its destination, Beautiful write Valsa. Best wishes
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:31:00 PM
Yes, it is rushing to join with the sea at some point.... its final destination. Thank you so much !
Date: 7/31/2022 8:44:00 AM
There are no better ways to explore the world than to be one with nature, Valsa. Wonderfully peaceful surroundings are depicted here. Be blessed.
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Lasaad ! Nature is the source of inspiration for many poets, like us!
Date: 7/31/2022 5:32:00 AM
So soothing and spiritual! Beautiful write, Valsa
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:28:00 PM
Thanks a lot Seeker friend !
Date: 7/31/2022 2:04:00 AM
Nothing beats being at one with nature Valsa, you discribe a very tranquil place. Tom
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:27:00 PM
No doubt about it Tom for a true nature lover ! Thanks a lot dear poet friend ....

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