A Stream In the Woods

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Like a toddler taking maiden steps
The narrow stream moves through the woods
Tripping and falling over pebbles and boulders
Chiming its silver anklets

Drowning the whisper of bamboo leaves
Its sweet murmur falls in my ears
As an eternal living melody
The cosmic song heard over aeons

Forcing itself in irrepressible flow
It thrusts and shoves its way down
Through thickets and a line of ferns
And the tangle of creepers and brambles

As the water sluices down the rocks
It is a frothing braided torrent
Producing a harsh grating roar
Like the crescendo of a tribal symphony

There it forms into a small pool
With its waves gently rippling
Where birds merrily come to take a dip
Refreshed they fly back sunning their wet feathers

Sometimes travelling unseen
It suddenly emerges into the open
Cutting its way through cracks and fissures
Never willing to surrender before hurdles

With a bearing immaculate in grace
It sends out waves of pure delight
What joy it is to watch the dilly dally
Of this sedate pilgrim moving to its destination

July.31.2022
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Date: 8/3/2022 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful steam, great imagery
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Valsa George
Date: 8/6/2022 4:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot Paghunda..... Have a great weekend !
Date: 8/1/2022 8:56:00 AM
I love your tale of the stream Valsa. We become the stream when we read. Marvelous imagery and theme. This one is a favorite for me. Thank you for your effort in writing and sharing. Exceptional and beautiful. Blessings your way...
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Date: 8/6/2022 4:08:00 AM
Thank ou so much Michael ! Glad you could enjoy this ! I feel honored that you see this as one of your Faves.
Date: 8/1/2022 1:34:00 AM
Incredibly beautiful scenes, great imagery. I love nature and such poems bring me joy.
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Valsa George
Date: 8/1/2022 3:04:00 AM
I know you are very close to Nature. Glad you liked my poem ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 7/31/2022 7:39:00 PM
Such a graceful, delicate extended metaphor, Valse. A truly moving poem. Bravo, Gershon
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Valsa George
Date: 7/31/2022 9:36:00 PM
Much delighted by your words of deep appreciation ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 7/31/2022 6:50:00 PM
Keep moving your feet and your heart dear pilgrim and the wonders will never cease, nor the poetry, nicely penned dear friend, it was a pleasure to read you this evening, blessings
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Valsa George
Date: 7/31/2022 9:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for your insightful comment dear Rose . Glad ou enjoyed this poem.
Date: 7/31/2022 6:36:00 PM
Reminds me of the French adage, "Two tears were flowing down a river; cried one: "I am the tear of a girl who lost her lover!" Sobbed the other: "I am the tear of the girl who found him!" To the sea! To the sea! Aloha!
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Valsa George
Date: 7/31/2022 9:34:00 PM
You are so entertaining Rico. I enjoy your comments as well as your limericks . Thanks a lot !
Date: 7/31/2022 9:33:00 AM
Exquisite imagery crafted by your gifted pen, Valsa. You bring forth the sights and sounds eloquently, as always.
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Valsa George
Date: 7/31/2022 9:32:00 PM
I feel extremely delighted to find that that you liked it ! Thank you so much Vijay !
Date: 7/31/2022 8:55:00 AM
It purpose is to make that pilgrimage to its destination, Beautiful write Valsa. Best wishes
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Valsa George
Date: 7/31/2022 9:31:00 PM
Yes, it is rushing to join with the sea at some point.... its final destination. Thank you so much !
Date: 7/31/2022 8:44:00 AM
There are no better ways to explore the world than to be one with nature, Valsa. Wonderfully peaceful surroundings are depicted here. Be blessed.
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Lasaad ! Nature is the source of inspiration for many poets, like us!
Date: 7/31/2022 5:32:00 AM
So soothing and spiritual! Beautiful write, Valsa
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Valsa George
Date: 7/31/2022 9:28:00 PM
Thanks a lot Seeker friend !
Date: 7/31/2022 2:04:00 AM
Nothing beats being at one with nature Valsa, you discribe a very tranquil place. Tom
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:27:00 PM
No doubt about it Tom for a true nature lover ! Thanks a lot dear poet friend ....
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