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A Stream In the Woods

Like a toddler taking maiden steps
The narrow stream moves through the woods
Tripping and falling over pebbles and boulders
Chiming its silver anklets

Drowning the whisper of bamboo leaves
Its sweet murmur falls in my ears
As an eternal living melody
The cosmic song heard over aeons

Forcing itself in irrepressible flow
It thrusts and shoves its way down
Through thickets and a line of ferns
And the tangle of creepers and brambles

As the water sluices down the rocks
It is a frothing braided torrent
Producing a harsh grating roar
Like the crescendo of a tribal symphony

There it forms into a small pool
With its waves gently rippling
Where birds merrily come to take a dip
Refreshed they fly back sunning their wet feathers

Sometimes travelling unseen
It suddenly emerges into the open
Cutting its way through cracks and fissures
Never willing to surrender before hurdles

With a bearing immaculate in grace
It sends out waves of pure delight
What joy it is to watch the dilly dally
Of this sedate pilgrim moving to its destination

July.31.2022
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Zahid Avatar
August 3, 2022 at 12:06 PM
Beautiful steam, great imagery
George Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Thanks a lot Paghunda..... Have a great weekend !
Tor Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 8:56 AM
I love your tale of the stream Valsa. We become the stream when we read. Marvelous imagery and theme. This one is a favorite for me. Thank you for your effort in writing and sharing. Exceptional and beautiful. Blessings your way...
George Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Thank ou so much Michael ! Glad you could enjoy this ! I feel honored that you see this as one of your Faves.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 1:34 AM
Incredibly beautiful scenes, great imagery. I love nature and such poems bring me joy.
George Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 3:04 AM
I know you are very close to Nature. Glad you liked my poem ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Wolf Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Such a graceful, delicate extended metaphor, Valse. A truly moving poem. Bravo, Gershon
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:36 PM
Much delighted by your words of deep appreciation ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Rose  Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:50 PM
Keep moving your feet and your heart dear pilgrim and the wonders will never cease, nor the poetry, nicely penned dear friend, it was a pleasure to read you this evening, blessings
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so much for your insightful comment dear Rose . Glad ou enjoyed this poem.
Leffanta Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:36 PM
Reminds me of the French adage, "Two tears were flowing down a river; cried one: "I am the tear of a girl who lost her lover!" Sobbed the other: "I am the tear of the girl who found him!" To the sea! To the sea! Aloha!
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:34 PM
You are so entertaining Rico. I enjoy your comments as well as your limericks . Thanks a lot !
Pandit Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Exquisite imagery crafted by your gifted pen, Valsa. You bring forth the sights and sounds eloquently, as always.
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:32 PM
I feel extremely delighted to find that that you liked it ! Thank you so much Vijay !
May Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:55 AM
It purpose is to make that pilgrimage to its destination, Beautiful write Valsa. Best wishes
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:31 PM
Yes, it is rushing to join with the sea at some point.... its final destination. Thank you so much !
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 8:44 AM
There are no better ways to explore the world than to be one with nature, Valsa. Wonderfully peaceful surroundings are depicted here. Be blessed.
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:29 PM
Thank you so much dear Lasaad ! Nature is the source of inspiration for many poets, like us!
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 5:32 AM
So soothing and spiritual! Beautiful write, Valsa
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:28 PM
Thanks a lot Seeker friend !
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 2:04 AM
Nothing beats being at one with nature Valsa, you discribe a very tranquil place. Tom
George Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:27 PM
No doubt about it Tom for a true nature lover ! Thanks a lot dear poet friend ....
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