A Strange Machine

The body is a strange machine
With lots of moving parts
And once we’re born, like products purchased,
All the action starts.

The heart pumps blood, the lungs expand
And brain cells do abound.
The muscles grow, the eyes and ears
Take note of what’s around.

As years go by, from overuse
Or injuries we’ve faced,
The cogs and gears inside break down
And sometimes they’re replaced.

We plug along, though, even when
We’re aching and we’re tired,
For as we age, we also know
Our warranty’s expired.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 10:09 AM
I am loving the last line
Fowler Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 10:35 AM
The gifts of growing old...nice one Ilene! Linda
Wolf Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 7:40 PM
Ha, ha! Nicely done. Can't I get an extended warranty though?! Somewhere? Someone? HELP, PLEASE! ~ Charley Horse
Flood Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Funny but apt, Ilene. If only our parents had taken out the extended warranty. Mind you, when I bought a new cooker a few years back, I was told that the warranty did not cover abuse or misuse of the knobs (honest truth) So perhaps our ultimate demise will be due to caveats or exclusions.
Slaughter Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 1:49 PM
And no extensions available...either from Medicare, Medicaid, AAA, or AARP. An ironically very funny read, Ilene.
Leffanta Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 11:18 AM
Another Fav'd! Aloha! (???The captcha code is TUA, the Miami Dolphins quarterback???)
Conn Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 3:04 PM
The holding hands feature is the last to go.
Kyser Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 1:52 PM
Ha, I'm in need of a few major appliances!
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