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A Story About a Girl

I have to tell a story About a girl who had no glory Out Spoken, Yet so broken Being rude, Always in a mood Never had luck with guys They will take one look at her and realize, That they want her friend in the dazzling disguise She felt very unattractive Yet wanted to be active Always taking a back seat Never felt strong enough to take the lead On a low, Wanting no-one to know The true beauty inside, who wants to burst out and show She started to analyse and delve Within herself Believed that there was something within her, She just needed to stir She became beautiful and bold She discovered gold Humble and kind With an open and wise mind She realized the fight was never external It was always internal She is now happy and content with her beautiful soul She has reached her goal Her inner beauty is what makes her glow Yes from insecure to bold she did grow The way she sway her hips when she walks The kind words she says when she talks Her heart filled with love, compassion and integrity This is her serendipity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/17/2013 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations Shannon..' '
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations Shanon xx
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your sweet win my dear Shanon! Thanks for sharing your poem. love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/15/2013 12:42:00 PM
Shanon , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for entering this wonderful loving poem. Thank you for the warm feeling and smiles!!! I posted a sweet blog, to all who took the time in supporting my contest "ALL ABOUT ME..." **YES I SMILE** :-) ~xox~ LINDA
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Shanon Jacobs
Date: 6/17/2013 3:34:00 AM
Wow thank you, LINDA......Im so, so stunned. Really didnt expect this:). Poetry, booster i must say....
Date: 6/11/2013 4:01:00 AM
this just made me remember a 1direction song. and im not even a fan.
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Date: 6/11/2013 3:28:00 AM
- Shanon, a enjoyable poem to read - well done!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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