A Stormy Play Date

I hear thunder grumble a complaint As the clouds push each other In a neighborhood brawl And kick at the mountain’s ridges In a fit of turbulence When with swords drawn high Lightning flashes In angry tormenting rage As a mighty wind races down From on high peaks The tempest bending its will Against valley and hill Then down comes the rain From clouds swollen angry mouth To dance the storms lament Of thunderous notes I see the drops tumble upon The lakes stormy surface White caps curling Their lips in a sneer of contempt Not worried at all This storm just child’s play For Zeus’s delight
written: 10-2-2019 copyright protected 2019 Jeanne McGee
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Mac Donald Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 11:52 PM
Powerful imagery enhanced by outstanding metaphors! Super write, Jeanne!
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:33 PM
lots of imagery... great stuff... excellent... Ann
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:02 PM
just child's play. What a pefect ending to this poem of great personification.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 2:26 AM
I can hear the thunder and feel the rain. Delighting Zeus and me!
Wolf Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Wow! Such an intriguing write. I'd kind of forgotten all about old Zeus... Everything fits in just perfectly in this poem. Bravo, Jeanne. Best wishes, Gershon
Mcgee Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Thank you Gershon. Your words of encouragement always mean a lot to me...and sometimes I feel I write my best when I do not have a contest to think about but just sit and feel what is going on around me...this storm chased me out of my hammock and back inside!
Green Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:18 AM
Wow, I love how you did this Jeanne. This was so cool. Wonderfully written my friend.
Perrin Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 6:14 AM
Beautifully done :-) x
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October 3, 2019 at 12:48 AM
I love your Tempest!!! Lonna
Mcintosh Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 10:02 PM
Beautifully worded. I enjoyed this one. God bless you, my friend
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