A Stormy Day In the Southern Alps

A STORMY DAY IN THE SOUTHERN ALPS

An environmentalist in love with his endowment, cast an eye upon the defender
of nature’s delicate balance, she the soul queen of conservation, together the two assimilate like the prevailing hurricane lock horns as the beast would in battle.The vibration rattles the old tin roof of our cabin, while the black possums scarper

clouds ejaculate
far below blank out the sun
Aoraki                     smiles

The tempest cuts through the backwoods far beyond the horizon, deep
in camouflage torments the deanery of elementary life forms. Flashes
of lightning waver through the gloom become centre stage, thunder 
rumbles on, a drum roll an intro to a symphony of hail harmoniously
pounding the diverse depth of the valley

drowning in colour
the forest canopy yields
Kakapo            declines


© Harry J Horsman 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Shetley Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 1:37 PM
stunning imagery, as always in your work. Glad to be back on the soup reading and writing again.
Williams Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 4:59 AM
An excellent Haibun Harry, and I love the Haiku at the end. Good Luck in the contest....Maria
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 1:02 PM
This is magical Harry! I love the power of nature. I bet this will do great in the contest! : )
One Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Now this is an awesome Haibun, great descriptions, I do like your haiku
Salehi Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 12:56 AM
Just beautiful my friend...just beautiful...god bless...
Ball Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 11:09 AM
WoW! Harry! Your description here brought the storm right into the room. It was both beautiful and frightening. I could feel the power of the tempest. Great Stuff! Loved it. God Bless, JB
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Great descriptions of nature's beauty and unrest. Like a variable and pretty lady.
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Fabulous writing, and a lovely Kiwi twist. Best of luck in the contest.
Tor Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 10:09 PM
Harry you created powerful images with perfect descriptive words. You created a surreal experience for the reader. I thank you for posting and for your great effort in creating such a fine write. Made my night in reading it. Highest of grades for this one!
Callus Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 4:32 PM
Cleverly tackled, Harry. It's rich in visual and auditory imagery; were I a high mountain like Aoraki I'd be smiling, too; the kakapo has every reason to decline!! // paul
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 3:41 PM
Hey, Harry, let me know if I missed any of your latest poetry this summer. I think I have seen all your work. getting ready to hurry home. It's my 42nd anniversary today with Joe. How time flies. Maybe I get to eat out tonight!
Muideen Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 2:35 AM
Good luck in the contest friend. You have posted a brilliant poem.
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 3:09 PM
- An excellent poem, Harry - Glad to see your ink still flowing :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bocsa Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 5:03 AM
From white storm, dear master of Haibun Your verses climb the mountains near sun. I look from my valley to meet you soon As winner of glory embracing the moon.
Dietrich Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:43 PM
I enjoyed seeing you write for this contest, Harry. I really don't get to see enough of you. Loved that line about the clouds in the first haiku. Great creativity! You did it very succinctly. Mine is so long, I dare not post it!! Thanks for reading my poems today, you are such a sweetie.
Kiser Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:34 PM
That was a lovely, soothing Haibun.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Wow this impressive Harry! I think Debbie will really appreciate your entry! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:34 AM
A write with great images and things to ponder!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 2:59 AM
you do it so well xx
Sathasivam Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Excellent poem about nature's stormy weather. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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