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Poem written for and submitted to “One Couple of Days” poetry contest, Charles Messina, sponsor, October 8, 2025.

A STORMY DAY IN TEXAS--OBD

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One stormy day in Texas the sky cracked open like a cheap piñata, Jalapeño hail lashed the bluebonnets—goodbye, pretty blooms hasta la vista! Rain turned to spicy salsa, rivers into ice-cold Lone Star Beer. Cowpokes huddled together, prayin’ in the cactus-flavored air. Pa’s prize longhorns blew away, where they went he had no idea Eventually landed in Dallas yellin', "Y'all seen my tortillas?" Crick rose up where three armadillos was sharin' one floatie. Were heard to ask, “Where’s our guacamole?” ¡Olé!
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Miller Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Wild and wonderful, congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Awesome one. Congrats
Messina Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 5:40 AM
Love this, Sara. Very witty and fun...Congratulations on your winning placement! I'll drink to that...with a Lone-Star Beer, of course (lol).
Gauthier Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 6:35 PM
lol ~ omg what a wild poem... and a wild photo that I can only assume inspired it?
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 6:32 PM
yes, that 'dillo' inspired this poem. Actually, I find them ugly creature. yuck
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