A Stormy Day

In the heaven above
The sky was packed
With too much snow
So the angels thought of a solution
And aimed their snow blower
To a special spot
That cleared the snow from above

Slowly the snow funneled
Down to the earth

Then it became stormy
It was like that all day long

The wind blew the snowflakes everywwashere
Along the walking path

It was impossible to see
It was very stormy
No one ventured outside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sietesantos Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 11:36 AM
I just had one of those stormy days and your vibrant imagery conjured up exactly what I experienced! I like to enjoy a nice overnight storm when I can stay home and nestle in bed! Well done, my friend, love this stormy piece! Hugs. Pandita
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Hello Pandita,Yes so do I, to stay home and watch the storm outside my window. I like the sound of the howling wind I do not like to be outside in a storm. Have a nice eveningy friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Hugs to you as wellmy friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Ha ha, an interesting thought.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 7:38 AM
I do remember little children doing this.. Yes it is an interesting thought. Have a nice day my friend.
Babcock Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 11:45 AM
The joys of a stormy day--not really they are just good to stay indoors. Right now we have such icy streets so have to watch and not slip. A nice poem on winter. love phyl
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 1:10 PM
I do not go out on stormy days. I stay indoors. When I was working, and the weather was stormy, it was hard to go home. Have a nice day my friend.
Acrich Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:57 AM
I'm not going to read any of your poems,But I will cut and paste them on my trusty Ginger spelling app and I will click one button and it reads it back to me, In a guy's voice, I wonder if I can change that to a woman's voice, not a clue What I like about this poems it did not make me sad or happy just a nice light mood, and  I can't fool anyone anymore,  I'm not an expert on what is good or bad,  im an amateur, I liked it
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 11:16 AM
To make you feel better I am still feeling my way when writing poetry. I enjoy writing poetry so much and creating my own poems as well.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Hello Marc,I am pleased you like this poem.it made you feel in a light mood.I am an amateur as well. I go with my feelings as to how the poems feels to me.If I do not understand ...I say so.Which ever way you read my poetry is alright. Have a nice daymy friend.
Pett Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Great Poem Darlene, parts of the UK have come to a standstill due to snowfall, hope it’s not to bad for you, keep safe and warm. :))
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 1:34 PM
Hello Roy,thank you for the lovely comment.A snow storm in the UK.! Our snow storm has passed. But winter is not over yet. I am ccarful in the winter,even when the sidewalks are slippery I 'm extra careful. Have a nice day my friend.
Acrich Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 2:52 PM
I'm not ready to comment on your poetry, but im going to follow youSound like stalker to me I have not had time today, but I will It's so funny you have so many poems on here I wrote 120 and I though I was ready to publish a book until I ran into a guy who had 3000  Visit me on here just take A look it not  not about poetry Sometimes im afraid that other poetry am going to get into my brain and I will be going   But that is not the case https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=97183 https://plus.google.com/+marcacrich
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 7:18 AM
Hello Mar,that is fine with me that you are not ready to comment on my poetry.I do not go to other sites. Yes I have written many poems, I have wrtten for a long time.
Williams Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 5:17 AM
A lovely poem Darlene, keep safe and don't slip now.....Maria xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 7:29 AM
Hello Maria,thank you for your lovely comment. I am always careful when walking in the snow. Have a nice day my friend. xx
Scars Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:36 AM
great poem sweet Darlene :)-luloo
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment,my friend. Have a nice day .
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Hello Laura,thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Chowdhury Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 5:54 AM
nice poem darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Hello Sagrika, thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nce day my friend.
Downing  Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Oh this is such a fun read, but I do feel bad for you in the snow storm. Keep safe and warm... hugs and smiles :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Hello Akkina,this year we are having a colder winter with a lot of snow. Thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day .
Gentile Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 11:04 AM
I wish the angels would use their snow blower on my sidewalks, lol, I enjoyed your fun poem xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Hello Mike, that would be nice if they could. LOL.I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo.
Berggren Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Hi dar, Snow is un when you're a kid, no fun when you have go to work and make a living. Like your poem about the blower pushing the snow out of the sky down to earth.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Ye my friend winter is more fun for the children,they always enjoy the winter. It is different for us adults. Have a nice day my friend.
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