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A Stormy Day

In the heaven above The sky was packed With too much snow So the angels thought of a solution And aimed their snow blower To a special spot That cleared the snow from above Slowly the snow funneled Down to the earth Then it became stormy It was like that all day long The wind blew the snowflakes everywwashere Along the walking path It was impossible to see It was very stormy No one ventured outside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/6/2018 11:36:00 AM
I just had one of those stormy days and your vibrant imagery conjured up exactly what I experienced! I like to enjoy a nice overnight storm when I can stay home and nestle in bed! Well done, my friend, love this stormy piece! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:13:00 PM
Hello Pandita,Yes so do I, to stay home and watch the storm outside my window. I like the sound of the howling wind I do not like to be outside in a storm. Have a nice eveningy friend.
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:13:00 PM
Hugs to you as wellmy friend.
Date: 1/22/2018 9:05:00 AM
Ha ha, an interesting thought.
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:38:00 AM
I do remember little children doing this.. Yes it is an interesting thought. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 1/21/2018 11:45:00 AM
The joys of a stormy day--not really they are just good to stay indoors. Right now we have such icy streets so have to watch and not slip. A nice poem on winter. love phyl
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Date: 1/21/2018 1:10:00 PM
I do not go out on stormy days. I stay indoors. When I was working, and the weather was stormy, it was hard to go home. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 1/18/2018 8:57:00 AM
I'm not going to read any of your poems,But I will cut and paste them on my trusty Ginger spelling app and I will click one button and it reads it back to me, In a guy's voice, I wonder if I can change that to a woman's voice, not a clue What I like about this poems it did not make me sad or happy just a nice light mood, and  I can't fool anyone anymore,  I'm not an expert on what is good or bad,  im an amateur, I liked it
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:16:00 AM
To make you feel better I am still feeling my way when writing poetry. I enjoy writing poetry so much and creating my own poems as well.
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Date: 1/18/2018 1:30:00 PM
Hello Marc,I am pleased you like this poem.it made you feel in a light mood.I am an amateur as well. I go with my feelings as to how the poems feels to me.If I do not understand ...I say so.Which ever way you read my poetry is alright. Have a nice daymy friend.
Date: 1/18/2018 7:28:00 AM
Great Poem Darlene, parts of the UK have come to a standstill due to snowfall, hope it’s not to bad for you, keep safe and warm. :))
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Date: 1/18/2018 1:34:00 PM
Hello Roy,thank you for the lovely comment.A snow storm in the UK.! Our snow storm has passed. But winter is not over yet. I am ccarful in the winter,even when the sidewalks are slippery I 'm extra careful. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 1/17/2018 2:52:00 PM
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Date: 1/18/2018 7:18:00 AM
Hello Mar,that is fine with me that you are not ready to comment on my poetry.I do not go to other sites. Yes I have written many poems, I have wrtten for a long time.
Date: 1/17/2018 5:17:00 AM
A lovely poem Darlene, keep safe and don't slip now.....Maria xx
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Date: 1/17/2018 7:29:00 AM
Hello Maria,thank you for your lovely comment. I am always careful when walking in the snow. Have a nice day my friend. xx
Date: 1/16/2018 7:36:00 AM
great poem sweet Darlene :)-luloo
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment,my friend. Have a nice day .
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:27:00 AM
Hello Laura,thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 1/16/2018 5:54:00 AM
nice poem darlene
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:28:00 AM
Hello Sagrika, thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nce day my friend.
Date: 1/15/2018 9:40:00 PM
Oh this is such a fun read, but I do feel bad for you in the snow storm. Keep safe and warm... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/16/2018 9:38:00 AM
Hello Akkina,this year we are having a colder winter with a lot of snow. Thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day .
Date: 1/15/2018 11:04:00 AM
I wish the angels would use their snow blower on my sidewalks, lol, I enjoyed your fun poem xxoo
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Date: 1/15/2018 3:12:00 PM
Hello Mike, that would be nice if they could. LOL.I am happy that you have enjoyed my poem. Have a nice day my friend. xxx-ooo.
Date: 1/14/2018 6:13:00 PM
Hi dar, Snow is un when you're a kid, no fun when you have go to work and make a living. Like your poem about the blower pushing the snow out of the sky down to earth.
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Date: 1/15/2018 7:13:00 AM
Ye my friend winter is more fun for the children,they always enjoy the winter. It is different for us adults. Have a nice day my friend.

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