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A Storm Is Brewing

The gray sky hue, so blue — of glad things there are few. No sun to warm my bones, which ache and crack with groans. The sod of rain deemed soft and my flood of ink scoffed at the knock knock knock. I’m apt to be mad this time. Bring back the pale of light. With it bring back my sight. Tell me helps on its way — that the storm will not stay. It laughs with scorn, each drop falls hard, and fast — no stop, as I plead to my God. Does He see through this fraud? I’d drop on knees to beg, Sir, but for my weak leg, for the peg taps my past — the dreg of drink will last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/14/2018 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2018 7:46:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/11/2018 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Kim, fantastic write ... enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme .. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 8:50:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 2/10/2018 10:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 8:50:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 2/10/2018 9:52:00 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2018 8:51:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 2/10/2018 9:21:00 AM
Nicely written, Kim, we must look beyond the storm with hope. Congrats on your win. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 2/10/2018 9:07:00 AM
You did this very well Kim, Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2018 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 2/7/2018 9:15:00 AM
Lovely poem, Kim. Well done with six word lines..best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 2/7/2018 8:37:00 AM
A monokureply........................................................... storms... heart-wrenching.... lovemaking... welcomed calm... dregs diluted... last longer
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/7/2018 8:43:00 AM
Get so inspired by what I am reading that I forget things, like wishing you success in the contest, reads good for a win!!! Oh yeah... Mick

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