A Storm Is Brewing

The gray sky hue, so blue —
of glad things there are few.
No sun to warm my bones,
which ache and crack with groans.

The sod of rain deemed soft
and my flood of ink scoffed
at the knock knock knock. I’m
apt to be mad this time.

Bring back the pale of light.
With it bring back my sight.
Tell me helps on its way —
that the storm will not stay.

It laughs with scorn, each drop
falls hard, and fast — no stop,
as I plead to my God.
Does He see through this fraud?

I’d drop on knees to beg,
Sir, but for my weak leg,
for the peg taps my past —
the dreg of drink will last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations, Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Thank you!
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Kim, fantastic write ... enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme .. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:03 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Thanks, Line!
Y. Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Hi Kim, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
Gondolf Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Nicely written, Kim, we must look beyond the storm with hope. Congrats on your win. John
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:42 AM
Thank you, John!
One Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:07 AM
You did this very well Kim, Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, Silent!
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Lovely poem, Kim. Well done with six word lines..best for a win.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Talbot Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 8:37 AM
A monokureply........................................................... storms... heart-wrenching.... lovemaking... welcomed calm... dregs diluted... last longer
Talbot Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Get so inspired by what I am reading that I forget things, like wishing you success in the contest, reads good for a win!!! Oh yeah... Mick
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