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A storm is brewing in the azure ether
Somber clouds loom with thunderbolts
Shadows enshrouded small seaside town
Tides crashes with ire against the rocks

Inner turmoil seethes in Lara's addled mind
Racing thoughts haunt through the years
Double personality was an escape from reality
Evincing the forbidden behavior by society

Cloudburst flooded the fishing coast by hours
Paralyzing a town when time seems stand still
Waterspout appeared in the fierce ocean waves
Desolating Cape Fishing Town without mercy

Shiny sun rays appeared in the sky after the storm
As a sign of hope between the desolated scene
Lara came out from the basement used as shelter
The inner and outer tempest concluded synchronously


For A Storm Is Brewing Contest
Sponsored by Kelly Deschler
Fifth Place
4-17-2016

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Date: 5/17/2016 4:13:00 PM
Your metaphor displays both the inner and outer fears Nayda and is superbly conveyed! Congratulations on your placement in this contest! #7. ; )
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Date: 5/17/2016 5:10:00 AM
Such a descriptive portrayal of a town being destroyed, Nayda! Congrats on your beautiful win!
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:53:00 PM
Nayda, a lot of imagery here in this poem. Congrats on your placement in Kelly's contest.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/16/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Rob.
Date: 5/15/2016 10:24:00 PM
An interesting poem that I enjoyed reading very much. I especially liked that final line... Well written, Nayda! Congrats on a win!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/15/2016 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Kelly. It was an excellent contest. Feel very honored with the placement on the contest.
Date: 4/18/2016 1:06:00 PM
Wonderfully descriptive write Nayda, I wish you well in the contest...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/18/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Charlie

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