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A Storm Is Brewing

A storm is brewing in the azure ether
Somber clouds loom with thunderbolts
Shadows enshrouded small seaside town
Tides crashes with ire against the rocks

Inner turmoil seethes in Lara's addled mind
Racing thoughts haunt through the years
Double personality was an escape from reality
Evincing the forbidden behavior by society

Cloudburst flooded the fishing coast by hours
Paralyzing a town when time seems stand still
Waterspout appeared in the fierce ocean waves
Desolating Cape Fishing Town without mercy

Shiny sun rays appeared in the sky after the storm
As a sign of hope between the desolated scene
Lara came out from the basement used as shelter
The inner and outer tempest concluded synchronously


For A Storm Is Brewing Contest
Sponsored by Kelly Deschler
Fifth Place
4-17-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 4:13 PM
Your metaphor displays both the inner and outer fears Nayda and is superbly conveyed! Congratulations on your placement in this contest! #7. ; )
Cheema Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 5:10 AM
Such a descriptive portrayal of a town being destroyed, Nayda! Congrats on your beautiful win!
Carmack Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Nayda, a lot of imagery here in this poem. Congrats on your placement in Kelly's contest.
Negron Flores Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Thank you very much Rob.
Deschler Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:24 PM
An interesting poem that I enjoyed reading very much. I especially liked that final line... Well written, Nayda! Congrats on a win!
Negron Flores Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Thank you Kelly. It was an excellent contest. Feel very honored with the placement on the contest.
Smith Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Wonderfully descriptive write Nayda, I wish you well in the contest...
Negron Flores Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Thank you Charlie
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