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A storm is brewing in the azure ether Somber clouds loom with thunderbolts Shadows enshrouded small seaside town Tides crashes with ire against the rocks Inner turmoil seethes in Lara's addled mind Racing thoughts haunt through the years Double personality was an escape from reality Evincing the forbidden behavior by society Cloudburst flooded the fishing coast by hours Paralyzing a town when time seems stand still Waterspout appeared in the fierce ocean waves Desolating Cape Fishing Town without mercy Shiny sun rays appeared in the sky after the storm As a sign of hope between the desolated scene Lara came out from the basement used as shelter The inner and outer tempest concluded synchronously For A Storm Is Brewing Contest Sponsored by Kelly Deschler Fifth Place 4-17-2016

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Date: 5/17/2016 4:13:00 PM
Your metaphor displays both the inner and outer fears Nayda and is superbly conveyed! Congratulations on your placement in this contest! #7. ; )
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Date: 5/17/2016 5:10:00 AM
Such a descriptive portrayal of a town being destroyed, Nayda! Congrats on your beautiful win!
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:53:00 PM
Nayda, a lot of imagery here in this poem. Congrats on your placement in Kelly's contest.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/16/2016 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Rob.
Date: 5/15/2016 10:24:00 PM
An interesting poem that I enjoyed reading very much. I especially liked that final line... Well written, Nayda! Congrats on a win!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/15/2016 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Kelly. It was an excellent contest. Feel very honored with the placement on the contest.
Date: 4/18/2016 1:06:00 PM
Wonderfully descriptive write Nayda, I wish you well in the contest...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/18/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Charlie

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