Bl Devnath Poet Rhyme

A Storm Is Brewing

a storm is brewing he is accustomed with that
                         he is very weak so is defeated in combat 
                        within the same world see many worlds live
                        to keep his love safe he does always forgive
                     at the time of math teaching history they discuss 
                         If right things are shown he sees their fuss 
                     as a captive bird he is living in such a sweet cage 
                         to write about his life there he has no page
                        with his daily experiences he has been booing
                           In this fantastic life he has been cooing 
                       a storm is brewing he is accustomed with that
                           he is very weak so is defeated in combat 


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Anand Parmale April 20, 2016 at 9:31 PM BL you have given storm a diff perspective.....You are unique as always.... 7

Charlie Smith April 18, 2016 at 1:10 PM Well done BL, best wishes for a rewarding contest... Bl Devnath April 18, 2016 at 1:14 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your uplifting comment and for your best wishes. Loved always, bl

Joseph May April 18, 2016 at 12:26 PM Nicely penned BL...best wishes Bl Devnath April 18, 2016 at 12:30 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your best wishes. Loved always, bl

Constance La France April 17, 2016 at 9:51 PM BL, good poem for the contest, best of luck ~ Bl Devnath April 18, 2016 at 11:16 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment and credit. Loved always, bl