A Storm

Storm raged winnowing out the fen
Panic clustered in the heart of glen
we two were out not knowing the fact
We will be caught in the act

The young storm gave us a real scare 
Hanging like a spider in mid air
Beckoned us on to her fuzzy golden web
We embraced each other the storm in rave

We fought against the divulging squall
Trees were falling under convulsing wall 
We kissed and kissed with our love in lug
The storm was laughing naked and smug

When sun rose with his rosy pink face
We were watching the hues of God's grace.



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Subject: Storm

1st February, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/11/2015 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. love the imagery in your poem. Blessings Sir and a 7
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:56:00 AM
Rajat, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/5/2015 6:27:00 PM
Storms will always be less scary when weathered with a loved one. Congratulations Rajat my friend! :D Kim
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Date: 3/5/2015 12:02:00 PM
Beautifully penned Rajat with great imagery. Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:39:00 AM
Rajat, stopping back to offer congratulations to you for your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:15:00 AM
sorry Rajat do not know what happened I thought I clicked on Nette's poem this was lovely congrats on 4th place
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:12:00 AM
really enjoyed your lovely poem Nette congrats on 5th place hugs
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Date: 3/2/2015 7:08:00 PM
Rajat! Wow, what a storm! Liked your poem and sending best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/1/2015 2:07:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Rajat! I really liked it. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 3/1/2015 11:56:00 AM
Glad you weathered the storm....Tim
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