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A Stone In the Cold 6th Verse

Ahead, a bear in sudden motion stands Moves alone in the snow covered meadow And searched with darting eyes as each commands Pawning and bellowing on the plateau Beyond the rise a hunter stands, silent Already pulled his arrow from quiver Hickory bow hand made is reliant To target an arrow it delivers As piercing the chest was a shot of luck Collasping its lungs as life is expelled His journey ends when the stiff arrow struck Fresh food to the hunter whose aim excelled Predator and prey to one another Gives life to one and death to the other for the contest Hunt for a Sonnet Gems & Seven Stones in the Crown sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 3/15/2014 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/15/2014 11:00:00 AM
thank you Joseph
Date: 3/15/2014 2:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, Frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/15/2014 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
Date: 3/15/2014 1:12:00 AM
Hi Frederic, Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/15/2014 8:51:00 AM
thank you Skat for your kindness
Date: 2/20/2014 12:26:00 PM
This is a stunningly dark, yet beautiful sonnet. The last line anchors the piece and sums up the poem perfectly. I think you have a strong contender here for the contest. Kudos; excellent write :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/20/2014 1:41:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness

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