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A stick at a time

a stick at a time the birds build a tiny nest a place to lay eggs. November 16, 2017

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Date: 11/19/2017 3:04:00 AM
Nature at work to perpetuate life! Excellent image dear, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thank you my friend--appreciate your comments!
Date: 11/19/2017 12:04:00 AM
This is a very lovely haiku :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Sneha! Your rare postings are well written as well!!
Date: 11/18/2017 12:38:00 AM
a sweet image of the bird building his future.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 11/17/2017 9:57:00 AM
A great visual!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 11/17/2017 4:50:00 AM
I loved this! And it's true, your poem and Heidi's write are like two poems that are meant to be together...you should find a way to do just that, a collab! I really love birds, and we have sparrows and robins building nests all over the place here in the country, and the funny thing, they like to build them against the house, and there are trees everywhere! Oh well, we let them do that, even if we do have to clean up their poo! Great Work my friend!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:20:00 AM
Thank you Russell! You are right--the two poems go together well! Thanks for sharing your bird love--sounds like an awesome place you live in!!
Date: 11/16/2017 9:40:00 PM
A wondrous haiku Vijay. A beautiful snapshot of a wonder of nature. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:16:00 AM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 11/16/2017 9:32:00 PM
I was very lucky to watch a nest being built in a tree in our garden. How painstakingly and patiently it was built. Love was put in stick by stick. A truly wonderful haiku Vijay...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 11/16/2017 3:00:00 PM
Quaint wisdom displayed in nature for our edification, Vijay. Lovely haiku ... well crafted. Love and joy always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2017 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Freddie!
Date: 11/16/2017 2:29:00 PM
- Home Sweet Home - Lovely haiku, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2017 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/16/2017 11:44:00 AM
A lovely haiku ... Beautifully shown in just one haiku ... Great ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2017 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 11/16/2017 9:55:00 AM
It takes patience...I would have probably purchased one...Simple but to the point...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Arturo!
Date: 11/16/2017 7:41:00 AM
Wow Vijay ...a beautiful Haiku and it is a perfect Haiku beginning to another Haiku I wrote recently that I was going to put in! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/16/2017 9:10:00 AM
Would love to read your Haiku soon--thanks for the comments Heidi!