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A Stick At a Time

a stick at a time the birds build a tiny nest a place to lay eggs. November 16, 2017

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Valsa George

Date: 6/20/2022 9:51:00 PM

One step at a time and the journey progresses till the destination is reached ! A Great truth through the image of a bird building its nest

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/19/2017 3:04:00 AM

Nature at work to perpetuate life! Excellent image dear, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:04:00 AM

Thank you my friend--appreciate your comments!

Sneha Rv

Date: 11/19/2017 12:04:00 AM

This is a very lovely haiku :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2017 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Sneha! Your rare postings are well written as well!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2017 12:38:00 AM

a sweet image of the bird building his future.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/18/2017 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2017 9:57:00 AM

A great visual!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thank you Kim!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/17/2017 4:50:00 AM

I loved this! And it's true, your poem and Heidi's write are like two poems that are meant to be together...you should find a way to do just that, a collab! I really love birds, and we have sparrows and robins building nests all over the place here in the country, and the funny thing, they like to build them against the house, and there are trees everywhere! Oh well, we let them do that, even if we do have to clean up their poo! Great Work my friend!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Russell! You are right--the two poems go together well! Thanks for sharing your bird love--sounds like an awesome place you live in!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/16/2017 9:40:00 PM

A wondrous haiku Vijay. A beautiful snapshot of a wonder of nature. Excellent and enjoyed!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Susan!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/16/2017 9:32:00 PM

I was very lucky to watch a nest being built in a tree in our garden. How painstakingly and patiently it was built. Love was put in stick by stick. A truly wonderful haiku Vijay...Maria

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/17/2017 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Maria!