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A State of Separation

A State Of Separation He looks and sees yon desk there'd be, a missing book, so he searched his tattered mind. Yet, be surprised wherein, he'd find, a mind of clear consciousness-- with open eyes, again surprised... Yon shelf there'd be his book, but wore a troubled look, for whence he knew not how'd it came to be. Afraid, yet ventured 'tis curiosity, but, for what he feared has now returned, a tattered mind once again. With open eyes, he looks around, yon desk and shelf, and oddly gazed a floor, as a book, sits unfound once more. 2019 May 25 *5th Place* CONTEST 600,ANY FREE VERSE ,ANY THEME,UP TO A MAX OF 20 LINES ~~Brian Strand
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Ashley Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 8:21 PM
A haunting and potent poem, William, conveyed with such stirring artistry. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 2, 2019 at 8:41 PM
A tight finale it be, TG for niceties sake Susan, keeps my head and heart up for effort, Aloha William
Godwin Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Tantalizing - this poem shall sit with me for a good while. It stirred my mind into contemplation - in a very good way poetically. It moved me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 9:05 AM
I am touched by your heartfelt words this morning CayCay, Aloha William
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Well penned with impact, William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Thanks again Line for stopping by for the above, Aloha wk
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