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A Star Lit Sky (What Reminds Me of You)

Upon the setting of the days bright sun A new sun arises in the dark of the night With silver lights that shine and dazzle like your beautiful eyes The darkness reminds me of the calmity of your voice Oh yes that voice that has saved me so many times And the moon Yes the moon reminds me of the soft pale glow of your fragile skin But then you left... I was so cold and alone It took my will to live Please just let me die alone Because its already over for me now Just as i thought I was going to die alone Someone who reminded me of you Came and picked me up Healed my wounds but i am still scared by you I will never forget those nights and days at the brink of suicide I will live on to love the person that reminds me of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 11:05:00 AM
Intriguing write Christian, really enjoyed it.. ~ Wilma
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