A Star Is Born

Out CAME DUSK dark and new
The MOON had risen and took its simple form.
Round and round was BEAU.

Every HEAVENLY BODY I saw began to act on a silky screen.
At TWILIGHT HOUR came the THEME THE birth of a new star.
It took its  PLACE among the MILKY WAY FAMILY.

EVERYTHING I had seen was of beauty, as it were a dream.
Every heavenly body  within the  milky way surrounded ME.
This is what I AM.  Here is where I belong.

Now I HEAR the twinkle of a HARMONIOUS song.
The song is my own.
HERE IS WHERE I BELONG.
I AM THE STAR THAT WAS BORN.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/22/2023 3:38:00 PM
Hello Val, Wo ,wo ,oh wow! This is great! I like this poem. It will be my fav.Love & peace. /Darlene\
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Date: 4/3/2015 6:43:00 PM
love this poem#7
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Date: 4/3/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thank you Sarah. Very much.
Date: 1/23/2015 2:49:00 PM
Hello Val, A really nice write here on "A Star is Born." These cosmological themes are always treat to ponder and write about. I guess the upshot is that in the end we are all "Cosmic Dust." (I just happened to write a poem last year by that theme name.) I enjoyed your poem here very much. And -- A "7" it is. Best Always, Gary
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:33:00 PM
Hey Gary, Thank you for this excellent and huge compliment. May poetry easily find you always.
Date: 1/12/2015 5:55:00 PM
love how this piece drew for me val excellent pen
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Liam. For taking time to read A STAR IS BORN.
Date: 1/10/2015 8:38:00 AM
We are stardust.
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Date: 1/23/2015 6:37:00 PM
HELLO Bill, thanks for your comment. Indeed WE are. My FRIEND.
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