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A Spring Proposal

IT WAS A SEASON OF SPRING, I WAS GLOWING IN A DIFFERENT WAY, MY MAN ENTERING MY BUILDING'S WING, COMING AT MY PLACE TO STAY. FOR A COUPLE OF MONTHS,DISTANCE BETWEEN US WAS LONG, I LIVED IN BARCELONA, HE LIVED IN ROME, THE PILLAR OF EMOTIONS FOR EACH OTHER BEING STRONG, MY HEART WAS FILLED WITH JOY WHEN HE CAME HOME. HE OFFERED ME TO DANCE, WHILE DANCING,I ASKED HIM FOR THIS RELATIONSHIP ARE YOU SERIOUS OR AM I A FLING, HE CONSIDERING IT AS AN APPROPRIATE CHANCE, SAT ON HIS KNEES AND PROPOSED ME WITH AN ENGAGEMENT RING. HE SAID YOU AND I HAVE SOMETHING WHICH I NEVER WANT TO LOOSE, IN MY DARKNESS, YOU ARE MY MOON, YOU ARE THE ONE WHOM I WILL ALWAYS CHOOSE, AND I CANNOT WAIT TO MARRY YOU SOON. IT WAS A SEASON OF SPRING, I GOT AN ABSOLUTE GORGEOUS ENGAGEMENT RING, AND WITH THE MAN OF MY DREAMS, A FOREVER THING.

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Date: 6/3/2022 7:14:00 AM
This is not a pantoum in any sense of the word. Also, by having everything in caps you are yelling to your readers. Having said that congratulations on your engagement.
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