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My most special day’s in stunning spring as anxious ‘mummy’ bird sounds a call her tiny fledglings take to the wing their maiden flight will always enthral! Young blackbirds chirp, listen to them sing as they rest on the stone garden wall I observe the re-birth Spring will bring It's the most joyful season of all The gift of new life truly astounds. Queen of the Day 9 x 9 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina Checked with how many syllables - 9 syllables per line * a little poetic licence in line 2! 3/10/19

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2019 4:17:00 PM

Beautiful verse, Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/19/2019 9:16:00 AM

So adorable. Congrats on your win, Jan.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/19/2019 8:46:00 AM

A sweet poem Jan, enjoyed!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/19/2019 8:24:00 AM

Spring is magic with the all the gifts of new life. This is a beauty too. Congrats.

Charles Messina

Date: 10/19/2019 7:40:00 AM

Beautiful write Jan, the gift of new life DOES truly astound. Such a lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement. Hugs // Charlie xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/4/2019 2:05:00 PM

There is truly nothing more amazing than "new life." The bird in the photo with outstretched wings is precious! Now as winter approaches, people's thoughts turn to spring again. The rebirth is magnificent! Best wishes in the contest with this amazing poem, Jan! Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green

Date: 10/4/2019 11:06:00 AM

This is wonderful Jan. And not one mention of those little birds pooping as they fly over. : ) Best wishes in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2019 6:54:00 AM

Thanks Chris, yes no mention of poop I am slipping lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2019 8:35:00 AM

- A charming and lovely poem, Jan :) - I'm already looking forward to spring :) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a nice weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/4/2019 7:03:00 AM

Beautiful write on the season of rebirth, GL in the Contest Jan..

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/3/2019 4:47:00 PM

A lovely piece so well penned Jan, spring season is so inspiring and motivating to lift our spirits. Have blessed day, Gordon

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2019 6:54:00 AM

Thanks gordon:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/3/2019 3:42:00 PM

Lovely Jan nothing like spring to breathe life back into everything! ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2019 5:37:00 PM

Thanks brenda:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2019 2:45:00 PM

Beautiful poem and sure to brighten anyone's mood. I always enjoy your touch with rhyme, always lovely. Good luck with the contest and all else, Jan. Blessing and hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2019 5:37:00 PM

Thanks caycay:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ts Poetry

Date: 10/3/2019 2:25:00 PM

Hope they make it..spring is special

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2019 2:26:00 PM

It certainly is TS:-) I love the re birth in spring but also the wonderful colours in Autumn:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/3/2019 2:23:00 PM

Hi Jan, I love the Spring "season" and you captured it very well . There's nothing like seeing a moma bird and her little ones. Watching them chirp and singing is a lovely sound. I really enjoyed the read. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2019 2:25:00 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) I just managed to finish the poem in time to grab the last slot in the contest and close it:-) hugs Jan xx