Smita Kulkarni Poet Rhyme

A Spring Day at a Dog Beach

Snug sunrays embrace the cold sea water, 
Making sure, the guests feel comfy and warm.
Gentle breeze awakens the cool spring air,
Making the breakers soft, silky and calm.

Many wagging tails mingle happily, 
Welcome friends with dynamic barks of joy.
By leaping and bouncing mischievously, 
They sweetly evince how not to be shy.

A groovy day for a beach escapade,
With kind owners, they cherish and adore.
Rampantly they gallop, dive, splash and fetch,
And savor the exclusive atmosphere.

Filled with gratitude, I watch them from afar,
And with a happy heart, embark on my walk.

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Gary Radice March 10, 2024 at 1:23 AM I can see your poem Smita. Your words bring the scene to life. Whenever I see dogs at the beach I always feel warmth. I associate watching them run with feelings of total freedom. Cheers - Gary Smita Kulkarni March 12, 2024 at 11:43 AM So nice of you to leave your appreciative comments, Garry! Thank you!

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen March 4, 2024 at 4:36 AM Very well written what a lovely poem. Smita Kulkarni March 12, 2024 at 11:42 AM Thank you, Yolanda for your feedback, much appreciated.

Valsa George March 1, 2024 at 3:20 AM I understand that there are beaches exclusively for canine friends. How happy they will be to leap and jump into the waves while their caring masters ramble along the sea strand watching them with amusement. A sweet poem dear friend. Smita Kulkarni March 3, 2024 at 9:04 AM Thank you Valsa for your comments! I'm a dog person and always enjoy watching them.

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2024 at 11:23 AM Lovely depiction of a fun spring day. I sure would love going to the beach on such a day as this. Smita Kulkarni March 3, 2024 at 9:05 AM Yes Andrea, the weather was just right for a beach walk that day. Thanks for stopping by!

Sotto Poet February 27, 2024 at 4:25 PM So well well-crafted metaphoric poem about spring. Your imagery as well as the wording is so well-conceived Smita Kulkarni March 3, 2024 at 9:05 AM Thank you for your encouraging words dear poet friend!!