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A Spontaneous Reaction

I

love

your smile

all the more

when it's not practiced

but tugs the corners of your lips

as a spontaneous reaction to my presence

for it immediately solicits a genuine smile of my own in return.


(Fibonacci)


3/9/2015

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Line Gauthier Date: 3/17/2018 1:37:00 PM So very sweet - the combination of the form and the subtlety of the object of scrutiny. Lovely, Emile. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/17/2018 1:41:00 PM Thanks Line, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/21/2015 5:58:00 PM Emile:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/20/2015 10:48:00 PM Emile, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/21/2015 9:16:00 AM Thank you so much, I appreciate it. Emile.

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/18/2015 9:04:00 AM Ahh!! How nice..I hope that you shared this one with the one that you love..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/18/2015 9:11:00 AM Thanks Sara, I appreciate all your support. Emile.

Kim Merryman Date: 3/17/2015 5:46:00 PM This was so sweet! It made me smile as I read it. Congrats on your win, Emile! Love, Kim Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/17/2015 7:02:00 PM Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate it. Emile.

Skat A Date: 3/15/2015 11:48:00 PM EMILE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Eve Roper Date: 3/15/2015 11:33:00 AM Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7 Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 3/15/2015 1:06:00 AM Ah wonderful ! Big congrats on ur win Emile! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/16/2015 8:09:00 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Jan Allison Date: 3/14/2015 8:45:00 PM what a lovely poem Emile - made me smile reading it - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Reason A. Poteet Date: 3/14/2015 8:20:00 PM unique thought, Emile. It is hard to imitate a true smile, they are so personal between two people. Congrats on your placement. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

David Furlong Date: 3/10/2015 4:08:00 AM I love the Fibonacci slant in this poem Emile and the clever link to genuine emotion. Brilliant.... :) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/10/2015 9:01:00 AM Thanks David, I enjoy hearing from you. Emile.

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/9/2015 11:25:00 PM :) Romantically sweet and delicious Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/10/2015 9:03:00 AM Eileen, is that a comment on yourself or my poem? Both are equally true, thanks. Emile.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/9/2015 8:04:00 PM so true, I wish you would put a photo up so I can see YOUR smile, I let you see mine! Light & Love Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/9/2015 9:01:00 PM Ah Debbie, some things are best imagined, thanks. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2015 6:15:00 PM this is wonderful, 'Emile. I see many people are catching on to that form now!!(it's basically a reversed etheree with a few of the lines different syllables) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/9/2015 9:04:00 PM Thanks Andrea, it's not as hard as it looks, give it a try. Emile.

Laura Leiser Date: 3/9/2015 5:55:00 PM Love the message of your poem, Emile! Good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 3/9/2015 9:05:00 PM Thanks Laura, your visits are always a treat. Emile.