Emile Pinet Poet Fibonacci

A Spontaneous Reaction

I

love

your smile

all the more

when it's not practiced

but tugs the corners of your lips

as a spontaneous reaction to my presence

for it immediately solicits a genuine smile of my own in return.

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Line Gauthier March 17, 2018 at 1:37 PM So very sweet - the combination of the form and the subtlety of the object of scrutiny. Lovely, Emile. Emile Pinet March 17, 2018 at 1:41 PM Thanks Line, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2015 at 5:58 PM Emile:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 10:48 PM Emile, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Emile Pinet March 21, 2015 at 9:16 AM Thank you so much, I appreciate it. Emile.

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2015 at 9:04 AM Ahh!! How nice..I hope that you shared this one with the one that you love..Congrats..Sara Emile Pinet March 18, 2015 at 9:11 AM Thanks Sara, I appreciate all your support. Emile.

Kim Merryman March 17, 2015 at 5:46 PM This was so sweet! It made me smile as I read it. Congrats on your win, Emile! Love, Kim Emile Pinet March 17, 2015 at 7:02 PM Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate it. Emile.

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 11:48 PM EMILE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Emile Pinet March 16, 2015 at 8:08 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Eve Roper March 15, 2015 at 11:33 AM Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7 Emile Pinet March 16, 2015 at 8:08 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 15, 2015 at 1:06 AM Ah wonderful ! Big congrats on ur win Emile! Emile Pinet March 16, 2015 at 8:09 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 8:45 PM what a lovely poem Emile - made me smile reading it - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Emile Pinet March 16, 2015 at 8:08 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

Reason A. Poteet March 14, 2015 at 8:20 PM unique thought, Emile. It is hard to imitate a true smile, they are so personal between two people. Congrats on your placement. Emile Pinet March 16, 2015 at 8:08 AM Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.

David Furlong March 10, 2015 at 4:08 AM I love the Fibonacci slant in this poem Emile and the clever link to genuine emotion. Brilliant.... :) Emile Pinet March 10, 2015 at 9:01 AM Thanks David, I enjoy hearing from you. Emile.

Eileen Manassian March 9, 2015 at 11:25 PM :) Romantically sweet and delicious Emile Pinet March 10, 2015 at 9:03 AM Eileen, is that a comment on yourself or my poem? Both are equally true, thanks. Emile.

Debbie Guzzi March 9, 2015 at 8:04 PM so true, I wish you would put a photo up so I can see YOUR smile, I let you see mine! Light & Love Emile Pinet March 9, 2015 at 9:01 PM Ah Debbie, some things are best imagined, thanks. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2015 at 6:15 PM this is wonderful, 'Emile. I see many people are catching on to that form now!!(it's basically a reversed etheree with a few of the lines different syllables) Emile Pinet March 9, 2015 at 9:04 PM Thanks Andrea, it's not as hard as it looks, give it a try. Emile.

Laura Leiser March 9, 2015 at 5:55 PM Love the message of your poem, Emile! Good luck in the contest! :) Emile Pinet March 9, 2015 at 9:05 PM Thanks Laura, your visits are always a treat. Emile.