A Split Peach

It never got to ripen before it had started splitting at the seam.
It was still too yellow. 
Not soft enough. 
Too smooth like it was pulled out of the tree too soon 
before it had a chance to feel.

It never got to feel enough of the breezes
It never got covered in the morning dew and feel the sun slowly dry its un-ripened skin
And start again
Or ever feel the earth catch it when it falls
In the verdant valley
Where I laid you down in your grass-stained
white gown 
before it rained
And where I cried 
missing all your sneezes. 

Instead, it split too soon
Its heart broke before it got to fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Sadly romantic - very nicely written with the personification and metaphor combo. :)
Etheridge Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 11:43 PM
Thanks. Off the radar a bit. Correct. It’s so sad. So very sad.
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