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A Spiders Revenge

Looking up at the light As i am now down in the drain Being cosy and warm Its not quite the same I'm in a channel floating on my back Something brown brushed me " Yuchers " what was that!! Its so dark i couldn't see An uneaten sandwich Och, now I'm hungry It seems I've gone miles In the darkness and smell If it was not for the dream Life would be real swell Floating under houses I've gone under streets Brights eyes in the dark Blimey, i hope we don't meet Its seem like i've come to another end I pity these spiders Who are washed round the bend Hey! up ahead i see dry land I feel cunning now, have to think of a plan I need to navigate, and use my nose But down in these drains Its suffered some blows I reach the point where i climb the wall With two little legs, I'm sure to fall I laugh because they can't climb the bath I'm struggling with, their basic path Its grimy, slippy, smelly and sticky This aroma of us, is very sickly So to all you spiders, who are washed down the drain I can understand, why life's never the same Repost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/25/2014 1:01:00 AM
okei the poems is about the spider's path but when i read your last few lines I think you don't mean the spiders only .. :) am i wrong?
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James Fraser
Date: 10/25/2014 8:08:00 AM
The last lines are the demise of the spiders who get washed down plug holes never to have lived long :(
Date: 6/18/2009 10:43:00 AM
LOL..the plight of the Itsy Bitsy Spider? Light & Love
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Date: 6/16/2009 7:50:00 PM
Oh James! Your creative pen just took you away with these colorful, humorous write. Great work.
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Date: 6/16/2009 3:46:00 PM
YEAH SO TRUE LIFE NEVER IS--LIKE THE STYLE------CHARMA
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