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A Speck of Light

Long after she slips into seclusion where streaks of splendor once plied crimson lines of love holding off night caresses enhance final specks of light Love filters in waiting moments still before weary days drift off to dream and I'm left in anticipation of you to climb into every bit of my soul Rest now dear, for the night chills comfort comes in the heart of two beauty in the breeze whispers softly let the rhythm inside move the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/15/2017 4:33:00 AM
Tim, you have shared a beautiful poem <3 One that is a favorite :)
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Date: 7/14/2017 1:21:00 PM
so romantic my friend :)
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Date: 7/13/2017 6:17:00 PM
I have enjoyed this poem.I like the last two lines of your poem. Hope you had a good day. Hugs.
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Date: 7/13/2017 4:52:00 PM
Lovely, comforting flow Tim. Well done...
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Date: 7/13/2017 4:13:00 PM
Really nice Tim. This felt good to read today.
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Date: 7/13/2017 12:11:00 PM
- A beautiful and soft poem, Tim :) - Love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2017 10:52:00 AM
You do romance extremely well, Tim. Surely, someone with so much romanticism can't be denied forever:)
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Date: 7/13/2017 10:07:00 AM
Ahh...so romantico...way to go...Timmo...lol...^WW^
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Date: 7/13/2017 9:50:00 AM
Such silky smooth lines Tim a delight to read thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2017 9:39:00 AM
I was fairly certain I wouldn't be the first to comment on this one, Tim, nevertheless I want to commend you for the silken exquisiteness of these rhyming verses. It's one of the most gentile and loving I've read lately.
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Date: 7/13/2017 9:31:00 AM
Beautiful Tim. I love the last stanza! :)
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