A Special Place

The old tree has long been felled,
And you  need to know the ground
To find  the last few signs of
Sunken family grave mounds.
The graveyard is now full
And it was thought for the best
To find some virgin ground 
To lay villagers at their rest.

For as long as I can remember 
This was a special place to me,
Legs sprawled along the grass
Back against the old oak tree
That had clawed its way, I thought,
To tower miles and miles high.
I could look through its branches
To see framed pieces of the sky.

This was the oak that overhung our roof,
Sighed and whispered and chatted away,
On and on since ever since I was born,
Never silent for very long, night or day
As it played and teased
And worked the breeze
In a chorus with 
All the other trees;

Behind me the work noise from uncle’s forge,
Sounds that changed with the time of year, 
Working blacksmith sounds
Normal and reassuring to hear.
To my left the grave of my granddad,
Dead long before his time
Killed by pneumonia
Aged just twenty nine.

Well before I was born but
I hoped he knew it was me there,
Knew I helped my dad each year
With the graveyard’s care,
Scything the grass 
Carrying it away
To make little piles 
To turn to hay

Which dad sold for a few coins
Not enough to pay all his work
But a little extra, a sort of
Seasonally needed perk.
We hoed and shimmed the paths
To give them a cared for aspect.
A gesture from the living
To show the dead respect.

I only remember sunshine
Those many hours I lay there,
Sunshine and birdsong
And crystal clear air.
It was my special place to sit and think
Where I was always at peace and ease,
Amongst the friendly family shades
And my beloved singing talking trees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 11/5/2022 3:53:00 AM
Pity the tree is gone now Terry, but the memories are better than gold. Its funny the sounds trees make, at times it seems they are whispering. Your poem is very special about a special place.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 11/5/2022 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Wen. I don’t know how old that tree was - the current church is over 200 years old, but there has been one there for over 1,000 years. They cleared them out because of Dutch Elm Disease and replanted.
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