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a spark

electricity hand brushes against bare arm do you remember

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2015 5:52:00 PM
I think this is my favorite of yours. All your Haiku's have a movement that really gets solid in the last line. This one, above all, jumps out to snatch my pulse with that last line. I love it. I don't rate often here, but a 7 and a favorite on here for sure. Thank you and keep on writing please.
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 2/6/2015 6:42:00 PM
thanks Brooks. I'm really glad you liked this one :-)
Date: 7/18/2014 9:08:00 PM
Oh wow you brought back memories that I didn't know I still had. What an innocent gesture could mean so much! Great Lynne. I dig this!
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 7/18/2014 10:33:00 PM
thanks so much ... really glad you like it!
Date: 7/18/2014 4:40:00 PM
Yes! An excellent Haiku. Hugs Jan xx
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Lynne Hanson
Date: 7/18/2014 4:41:00 PM
thanks Jan :-)