A Soul's Wish List

I would wish for you
the petals of a rose
with gilded thorns.
Roots to rival the dandelion,
deep and undeterred.
A soft yellow joy of spring Jonquils.
The tenacity of a vine
Searching
for the unknown.
A gentle purring
of a distant kitten
content in its moment.
The growl
of a restrained puppy
unsure of its limits.
The faith of a mother Robin
in the fledgling’s ability.
Enough doubt
to make you cautious.
Sufficient wisdom
to make you question
all doubt.


©12/22/2022
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "The faith of a mother Robin." Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
Alex Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 8:19 PM
"A gentle purring of a distant kitten content in its moment" - Great images. Congratulations!
Rose  Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 4:49 AM
This poem comes from a sudden burst of awareness after a long accumulated lifetime of wisdom, dear John I'm wishing you a Merry Christmas from the heart, and a grateful thanks for this lovely poem :)
M  Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 6:21 PM
A beautifully descriptive poem John G Lawless!! Ha Is G for Gary, George?Never noticed your G before? Lovely poem…Deb x
Jones Avatar
December 22, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Your first six lines are my favorite so unique. Well done
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