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A Souls Civil War

Help I can not win this battle on my own I needed you But you left me alone I begged you But you'd just get stoned My heart is gone It's my soul that's broken A civil war And I'm on my own On the outside I'm peaceful But my soul is fighting A civil war I need help I'm begging I'm screaming I need you now But I mean nothing to you anymore And my soul is fighting A civil war

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Jenni Preece

Date: 9/9/2009 11:50:00 AM

Thanks everyone :) I still never managed to find out what place i got in the contest though :-\

James Fraser

Date: 7/28/2009 12:25:00 PM

Another strong write Jenni, looks like your a winner, kool poem>>James

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/26/2009 8:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your success in the contest. Well done... "Civil War" very creative. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/25/2009 2:03:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/24/2009 1:35:00 PM

Jenni, congrats with your success in the contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2009 12:06:00 PM

It's very sad to think a "soul is fighting a civil war." If he gets stoned and leaves you with a broken soul, I hope you find someone who deserves your love. Very moving, Jenni!